Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: It depends on the type of information. For example, I'm good at remembering facts or ideas that interest me; however, when it comes to random numbers or names, I sometimes forget them.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains redundancy with repeating 'I felt bad.' Try to combine sentences and use linking words to improve flow. Also, clarify 'citing reminders' to a more common phrase like 'setting reminders.'

例: Yes, I once forgot my close friend's birthday, which made me feel really bad. Since then, I've started setting reminders on my phone to avoid making the same mistake again.

提案: Your answer is somewhat informal and contains unclear phrases like 'my nose app.' Try to use clearer vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid slang like 'game over' in formal speaking.

例: I need to remember many things daily, such as passwords, class times, assignments, and where I put my ID. Because of this, I rely heavily on an app on my phone, which acts like my second brain. If I lose my phone, it would be very difficult to keep track of everything.

提案: Your answer is fragmented and unclear, especially the last sentence. Try to form complete sentences, use linking words, and clarify your ideas for better coherence and naturalness.

例: I use my phone to remember important things by setting alarms, notifications, and calendar alerts. Without these reminders, I would probably forget many tasks. For example, my phone alerts me before each class to ensure I don't miss them.

× Since then, I've started citing reminders on my phone to avoid making the same mistake again.

✓ Since then, I've started setting reminders on my phone to avoid making the same mistake again.

The verb 'citing' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'setting' when referring to creating reminders on a phone. 'Citing' means to quote or refer to something, which does not fit here.

× So now my nose app is basically my second brain.

✓ So now my notes app is basically my second brain.

The phrase 'my nose app' is a typographical error or mispronunciation. The correct term is 'my notes app', referring to an application for taking notes. This correction clarifies the meaning.

× I have a class my phone thinks I move.

✓ I have a class my phone thinks I missed.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The intended meaning is likely that the phone thinks the student missed a class. 'I have a class my phone thinks I missed' is a clearer and grammatically correct sentence.