Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不必要的内容。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget quickly. For example, when I was a student, I found it hard to remember poems or practical information.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确时态和句型，清晰表达经历，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, I often forget important things, but I suddenly remember them later, which surprises me. Therefore, I write important things down to remind myself.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子说明具体内容。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my ID card number and the promises I made to others.

提案: 回答较好，但句子可以更自然流畅。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并适当扩展细节。

例: I used to write important things in my notebook, but now I usually save them on my phone and set alarms to remind me.

× I will always forget things quickly.

✓ I always forget things quickly.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是将来时。

× So when I was a student I need to remember some poet or some practical.

✓ So when I was a student I needed to remember some poems or some practical things.

句子中描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时。

× I need to remember some poet or some practical.

✓ I need to remember some poems or some practical things.

'poet'应为复数'poems'，'practical'应为名词形式'practical things'。

× Is this difficult for me to recite them?

✓ Is it difficult for me to recite them?

疑问句结构错误，应使用'Is it'而不是'Is this'。

× I usually forgetting something important and I'll suddenly remember it and make a surprising it.

✓ I usually forget something important and suddenly remember it, which surprises me.

'usually forgetting'应为一般现在时'usually forget'，句子结构需调整使表达更自然。

× So I will write it down if the writing the important thing down to remind me.

✓ So I will write it down to remind myself of the important thing.

句子结构混乱，'the writing the important thing down'用法错误，应简化表达。

× Maybe is the number ID card code and something I promised the person that I need to do?

✓ Maybe it's the ID card number and things I promised to do for someone.

句子缺少主语，结构不完整，需补充主语并调整表达。

× I used to write it down on my book, but now I usually write it on my phone and set a clock to remind me.

✓ I used to write it down in my book, but now I usually write it on my phone and set an alarm to remind me.

'on my book'应为'in my book'，'set a clock'表达不准确，应为'set an alarm'。