Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用更自然的表达方式，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I usually remember important dates and events related to my girlfriend.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致，句子结构完整，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, once my parents asked me to cook rice, but I forgot to add water, so the rice was not edible.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子略显重复。建议简化表达并使用连接词，使句子更自然。

例: I need to remember to exercise every afternoon because I want to lose weight and stay healthy.

提案: 表达不够准确，词汇使用不当。建议使用更恰当的词汇和句式，表达更清晰。

例: I usually type important reminders on my phone and check them every morning to help me remember important tasks.

× Yes, I have, nowadays I can't quite memorize some events and dates with my girlfriend.

✓ Yes, I can. Nowadays, I can't quite memorize some events and dates with my girlfriend.

这里的回答应该用情态动词can来表达能力，而不是用have。原句中使用了have，语法不正确。建议用"Yes, I can"来回答是否擅长记忆。

× One day my parents asked me to cook rice but I forget the water so the rice couldn't eat.

✓ One day my parents asked me to cook rice but I forgot the water so the rice couldn't be eaten.

这里的动词时态应该用过去式，forget应改为forgot。并且"the rice couldn't eat"语法错误，应该用被动语态"couldn't be eaten"。

× Actually, nowadays I need to remember every afternoon I need to do exercise because I want to lose weight.

✓ Actually, nowadays I need to remember that every afternoon I need to do exercise because I want to lose weight.

句子中缺少连接词that，使句子结构不完整。加上that后，句子更通顺。

× Nowadays I will type the environment things on my phone and every morning I will check my phone so it can help me remember.

✓ Nowadays I will type the important things on my phone and every morning I will check my phone so it can help me remember.

原句中"environment things"用词不当，应改为"important things"更符合语境。

× Nowadays I will type the environment things on my phone and every morning I will check my phone so it can help me remember.

✓ Nowadays I will type important things into my phone and every morning I will check my phone so it can help me remember.

动词type后应接介词into表示输入内容，原句缺少介词，导致表达不准确。