Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, actually I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget important tasks in my daily life, so I usually have to write them down in my notebook or to use apps to remember them.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, I have. The first time I went out alone I forgot to bring my key with me, which means I should wait for a long time to get back in my house. At that time my parents were just outside, so I waited for half an hour until they returned.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Well, as I mentioned, kids are one of the most important stuffs to remember. Other stuffs like important meetings or appointments are also important to remember.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Well, as I mentioned, I usually take notes on my notebook to remember crucial things like meetings or appointments. Another good way to remember things can be. Record them on the phones.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显重复，且句子结构可以更简洁。建议避免冗余，使用更丰富的词汇表达记忆困难，并且注意语法细节，如“to use apps”应为“use apps”。
例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For instance, I often forget important tasks, so I rely on writing them down in my notebook or using apps to help me remember.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容具体且有细节，但句子连接稍显生硬。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意时态和表达的准确性。
例: Yes, I have. For example, the first time I went out alone, I forgot my key, so I had to wait outside my house for about half an hour until my parents came back.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在词汇使用错误，如“stuffs”应为“things”或“matters”。内容重复且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，并丰富细节。
例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like taking care of children and attending meetings or appointments.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中断句不完整，表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
例: I usually take notes in my notebook to remember important things like meetings or appointments. Another effective method is recording reminders on my phone.
文法
× Well, as I mentioned, kids are one of the most important stuffs to remember.
✓ Well, as I mentioned, kids are one of the most important things to remember.
“stuffs”是非正式且错误的复数形式，正确的复数形式是“things”。“stuff”通常不可数，表示“东西”，不能用复数形式。
× Other stuffs like important meetings or appointments are also important to remember.
✓ Other things like important meetings or appointments are also important to remember.
同上，“stuffs”应改为“things”，因为“stuff”不可数，不能用复数形式。
× I usually have to write them down in my notebook or to use apps to remember them.
✓ I usually have to write them down in my notebook or use apps to remember them.
“or to use”中的“to”是不必要的，两个动词短语应保持平行结构，去掉“to”更符合英语习惯。
× The first time I went out alone I forgot to bring my key with me, which means I should wait for a long time to get back in my house.
✓ The first time I went out alone I forgot to bring my key with me, which meant I had to wait for a long time to get back into my house.
句中描述过去事件，时态应保持一致，故“means”应改为过去式“meant”，“should wait”改为过去式“had to wait”，“get back in”应为“get back into”，表示进入某处。
× get back in my house
✓ get back into my house
“get back in”不符合习惯用法，表示进入房子应使用“get back into”。
× Record them on the phones.
✓ Record them on the phone.
“phones”复数不合适，通常指自己的手机应为单数“phone”。
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