Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“because I always taking note”应为“because I always take notes”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，提高语言的自然流畅度。

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I always take notes to help me remember important information.

提案: 回答中充满了填充词（如“uh”，“umm”），影响流畅度。句子结构不完整且表达不够清晰。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，并且逻辑更连贯。

例: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting in college because I didn't take notes. As a result, I missed the meeting, which was a big mistake.

提案: 回答中表达不够准确，语法有误，如“that those are making me healthier”应改为“which help me stay healthy”。建议使用更准确的表达，并且句子更简洁自然。

例: I need to remember to take my medicines every day, such as calcium and vitamins, which help me stay healthy.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“read taking note in on my phone”应为“read notes on my phone”。建议简化表达，使用正确的语法结构，并且逻辑清晰。

例: I usually read notes on my phone and set alarms to remind me of important tasks.

× Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things and because I always taking note to help me memorizing things and.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because I always take notes to help me memorize things.

动词后面接动名词或不定式时，结构要正确。这里应使用动词原形take和memorize，而不是taking和memorizing。并且句子中and连接不当，应去掉。

× Yes, I forgot uh, something important when I was in college because I didn't umm, take note for that.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important when I was in college because I didn't take notes for that.

过去时态中，动词应使用过去式或过去分词。这里take note应改为take notes，且note应为复数形式。

× So, uh, for umm meeting. So umm, I didn't attend to the meeting.

✓ So, uh, for the meeting, I didn't attend the meeting.

动词attend后不加介词to，应直接跟宾语。并且meeting前应加定冠词the。

× I think I need to remember taking medicines in my daily life for example, such as calcium, vitamin, that those are making me healthier.

✓ I think I need to remember to take medicines in my daily life, for example, calcium and vitamins, which make me healthier.

动词remember后接动词时，需用不定式to take而非动名词taking。vitamin应为复数形式vitamins。which引导定语从句，谓语用make而非making。

× I like to read taking note in on my phone so it will let me know what should I do and I will make alarm to to let me know.

✓ I like to read notes on my phone so it will let me know what I should do, and I will set an alarm to remind me.

read后应接名词notes而非动名词taking note。介词on后不应有in。句子中what I should do语序应为陈述句。make alarm应改为set an alarm。