Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorizing things”，时态使用不当。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致性。

例: No, I am not very good at memorizing things. For example, last summer weekend, I went on a trip but forgot to bring my airport ticket. As a result, I had to return home to get it, which wasted a lot of time.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“go for abroad travel”应为“go abroad”，以及“cannot boarding”应为“cannot board”。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和动词形式。

例: Yes, I once forgot my passport when I traveled abroad. It was very frustrating because I couldn't board the plane without it, and I wasted a lot of time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“before I having a lunch”应为“before I have lunch”，以及“hard to me”应为“hard for me”。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用。

例: I need to remember to take my medicine in the morning and before lunch. However, sometimes I forget to take it before lunch, which can be difficult for me.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少关键名词，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，明确说明使用的工具或方法，并保持句子连贯。

例: I remember important things by writing notes on my phone or setting alarms. These methods help me not to forget important tasks, and they are very helpful.

× last summer weekend I go for a trip and I forget to take my airport ticket when I go to the airport

✓ last summer weekend I went for a trip and I forgot to take my airport ticket when I went to the airport

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词需要用过去式。"go"的过去式是"went"，"forget"的过去式是"forgot"，"go"再次出现时也应使用过去式"went"。

× I think I'm not good at memory things

✓ I think I'm not good at memorising things

"memory things"表达不正确，应该用动名词"memorising"来表示记忆的动作。

× I've forgotten my passport when I go for abroad travel

✓ I've forgotten my passport when I went abroad for travel

"go for abroad travel"表达不正确，正确用法是"go abroad"或者"travel abroad"，这里改为"went abroad for travel"更符合语法和语境。

× when I go to the airport and I cannot boarding the airplane because I don't take my passport

✓ when I went to the airport and I could not board the airplane because I didn't take my passport

描述过去发生的事情，动词需要用过去式。"go"改为"went"，"cannot"改为过去式"could not"，"boarding"用法错误，应改为动词原形"board"，"don't take"改为过去式"didn't take"。

× I need to remember to take medicine in the morning and also take medicine before I having a lunch

✓ I need to remember to take medicine in the morning and also take medicine before I have lunch

"having a lunch"用法不正确，应该用动词原形"have lunch"，且"a lunch"通常不加冠词。

× But sometimes it is hard to me because I usually forget to have a medicine before I have lunch

✓ But sometimes it is hard for me because I usually forget to take medicine before I have lunch

"hard to me"应为"hard for me"，"have a medicine"用法不当，应该用"take medicine"。

× I remember important things through my and I will take a note on my or take a clock on my and it will allow me to remember these things important and it is really helpful for me

✓ I remember important things by taking notes or setting alarms on my phone, which helps me remember important things and is really helpful for me

原句结构混乱，缺少必要的名词，表达不完整。应明确说明通过什么方式记忆，如"taking notes"和"setting alarms"，并且句子应连贯通顺。