Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中语法错误较多，影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Therefore, I usually take notes on my iPhone to make sure I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答中存在语法和逻辑混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，明确表达是否忘记过重要的事情，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, but I try to avoid this by always making notes on my iPhone to help me remember everything.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但表达不够自然，部分词汇使用不当。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免语法错误，使表达更流畅。

例: I need to remember my class and part-time work schedules. Also, I have to keep track of when to prepare for tests and the deadlines for my assignments.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议改正语法错误，清晰表达习惯，并使用合适的词汇。

例: I remember important things by writing them in my notebook. I have a habit of keeping a journal to help me stay organized.

× No, I really don't good at memorizing things.

✓ No, I really am not good at memorizing things.

这里缺少系动词“am”，正确表达应该是“I am not good at...”，而不是“don't good”。

× I always take a note on my iPhone in order to not forgetting anything.

✓ I always take a note on my iPhone in order not to forget anything.

短语“in order to”后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词“forgetting”。另外，“not forgetting”应改为“not to forget”。

× No, I didn't remember.

✓ No, I don't remember.

这里谈论的是一般现在时的记忆状态，应该用现在时“don't remember”，而不是过去时“didn't remember”。

× I've ever forgotten something important because I always make notes on my iPhone to prevent to make sure everything I would remember.

✓ I've never forgotten something important because I always make notes on my iPhone to make sure I remember everything.

“I've ever forgotten”用法错误，应为“I've never forgotten”。“to prevent to make sure”结构不正确，应简化为“to make sure”。“would remember”时态不合适，应为“remember”。

× I do need to remember my class schedule and my part time work schedule. Also when do I need to prepare my test and what is the daylight about my assignment?

✓ I do need to remember my class schedule and my part-time work schedule. Also, when I need to prepare for my test and what the deadline is for my assignment.

“when do I need to prepare my test”疑问句结构不合适，应改为陈述句“when I need to prepare for my test”。“daylight”用词错误，应为“deadline”。

× I remember important things by writing them on my notebooks.

✓ I remember important things by writing them in my notebook.

“write in a notebook”是正确搭配，表示在笔记本里写；“on my notebooks”不合适。

× I have habit of writing journalists.

✓ I have a habit of writing journals.

“habit”前应加冠词“a”。“writing journalists”意思是写记者，错误，应为“writing journals”（写日记）。