Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有语法错误，如“always memorizing”应为“always memorize”，且句子不完整，缺少结尾。建议注意动词时态和句子完整性，避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially ancient Chinese poems and articles. For example, I can memorise a 500-word article in about 20 minutes.

提案: 回答中断断续续，语法和表达不流畅，且信息表达不够清晰。建议练习连贯表达，使用完整句子，并注意时态和介词的正确使用。

例: Honestly, yes. When I was in grade 11 during winter, I needed to prepare for a presentation with a deadline in December, but I mistakenly thought it was next year.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，注意动词形式和句子完整性。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my classes, homework, tasks before presentations, and appointments with people.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“writers”应为“writing”，且表达重复。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，避免重复，表达更自然流畅。

例: I remember important things by writing notes, sending reminders to myself on WeChat, or repeating them several times.

× I always memorizing 500 words articles in about 20 minutes and.

✓ I always memorize 500-word articles in about 20 minutes.

这里动词always后面应该用动词原形或第三人称单数形式，不能用动名词memorizing。建议用一般现在时的动词形式memorize。

× Honestly yes, when I was grade 11. Winter, I need to, I need to prepare for a presentation and the deadline is at December. But I, I'm, I thought it was at the next year.

✓ Honestly yes, when I was in grade 11, winter, I needed to prepare for a presentation and the deadline was in December. But I thought it was next year.

描述过去的事情时，动词需要用过去时态。need改为needed，deadline的动词is改为was，表示过去的状态。

× Honestly yes, when I was grade 11. Winter, I need to, I need to prepare for a presentation and the deadline is at December.

✓ Honestly yes, when I was in grade 11, winter, I needed to prepare for a presentation and the deadline was in December.

表示年级时应使用介词in，表示月份时应使用介词in，而不是at。

× I always memorizing 500 words articles in about 20 minutes and.

✓ I always memorize 500-word articles in about 20 minutes.

这里articles前的数量词和名词搭配不正确，应该用复合形容词500-word修饰articles。

× The things I need to do before presentation or freight talk or something like this and when and where I I need to met some people or.

✓ The things I need to do before a presentation or a speech or something like this, and when and where I need to meet some people.

presentation和speech前需要加冠词a，动词meet用原形，且freight talk应为speech。

× when and where I I need to met some people or.

✓ when and where I need to meet some people.

动词meet在这里应为原形，不能用过去式met。

× I remember important things by writers on a little note or send it to to myself on on my WeChat or just repeated to myself once and once again.

✓ I remember important things by writing on a little note or sending it to myself on my WeChat or just repeating to myself once and once again.

by后面应接动名词形式，writers应为writing，send改为sending，repeated改为repeating。

× send it to to myself on on my WeChat or just repeated to myself once and once again.

✓ send it to myself on my WeChat or just repeat it to myself once and once again.

去掉多余的to和on，保持句子简洁正确。