Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“a very good memorizing skills”应为“very good memorization skills”。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达具体经历。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, when I was a child, I often memorized poems for contests, which helped me improve my memory skills.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，清楚描述忘记的具体内容和后果。

例: Yes, I forgot the password to my banking app a few days ago, which made it difficult for me to transfer money or check my balance.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体细节。建议直接回答问题，并列举具体需要记住的事项，使用完整句子。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like my PIN codes, house keys, and appointments.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，并使用连贯的句子。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a notes app on my iPhone or on a whiteboard near my bed.

× I think I have a very good memorizing skills.

✓ I think I have very good memorizing skills.

这里的'skills'是复数，前面的限定词用'a'表示单数，导致单复数不一致。应去掉'a'，使限定词和复数名词一致。

× When I was a child, I memorized a lot of words in the passage and probably I remember.

✓ When I was a child, I memorized a lot of words in the passage and probably I remembered them.

句中前半部分是过去时，后半部分用现在时'remember'不一致，应改为过去时'memorized'或'membered'，并补充宾语'them'使句子完整。

× Especially in a contest in Chinese poem contest, I remember.

✓ Especially in a Chinese poem contest, I remember it.

句子缺少宾语，'remember'后应加宾语'it'，使句子完整。

× Ah, I have forgotten something very important just several days ago.

✓ Ah, I forgot something very important just several days ago.

'just several days ago'明确指过去时间，不能用现在完成时'have forgotten'，应使用一般过去时'forgot'。

× I've forgotten my important key numbers in opening the bank app to maybe like receive some money or transfer.

✓ I've forgotten my important key numbers for opening the bank app to maybe receive or transfer some money.

介词'in'用法不当，表示目的时应使用'for'，且'like'多余，应去掉。

× I think there are many things I need to remember, so probably first is the some keywords key pin code, some key such as the key to open the.

✓ I think there are many things I need to remember, so probably first is some keywords, key pin codes, and keys such as the key to open the door.

句中'some keywords key pin code, some key'结构混乱，单复数不一致，应将关键词、密码和钥匙分别用复数形式表达，并补充缺失的名词'door'。

× Nah, I remember important things by writing them on the app on my iPhone and probably I will write down it on the cardboard and no no on the on the whiteboard just in front of my bed.

✓ Nah, I remember important things by writing them in the app on my iPhone, and probably I will write them down on the cardboard or on the whiteboard just in front of my bed.

介词'on the app'应改为'in the app'，'write down it'应改为'write them down'，并且句子中重复和语序混乱，应调整使句子通顺。