Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法有错误，如“this ability become declining”应为“this ability has declined”。回答内容稍显冗长且不够自然，建议简洁表达并注意时态变化。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, but I have noticed that my memory has declined a bit as I got older.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，“I've gotten”应为“I've forgotten”。内容表达较清楚，但可以更具体说明忘记的事情。

例: No, I have never forgotten anything very important, but sometimes I forget small things like buying vegetables or bringing my ID card when I travel.

提案: 回答中语法不完整，如“such as go to a doctor”应为“such as going to the doctor”。内容较笼统，建议提供更具体的例子并使用连接词。

例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as going to the doctor and meeting my friends for a date.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”，“remind me”应为“remind myself”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually make a to-do list on paper, which is really helpful. Wherever I go, I take the list with me to remind myself not to forget important things.

× But as I grew older, this ability become declining.

✓ But as I grew older, this ability became declining.

这里描述过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式，'become' 应改为过去式 'became'。

× Oh no, I never forgot anything important, but I've gotten some small things like buying vegetables for lunch or taking the ID card for traveling.

✓ Oh no, I have never forgotten anything important, but I've forgotten some small things like buying vegetables for lunch or taking the ID card for traveling.

第一句中，'never forgot' 应使用现在完成时 'have never forgotten' 表示到目前为止的经历。第二句中，'I've gotten' 用法不当，应改为 'I've forgotten'，因为这里指的是忘记了某些小事。

× such as go to a doctor or have a date with my friends.

✓ such as going to a doctor or having a date with my friends.

'such as' 后面应接动名词形式，表示举例，故 'go' 和 'have' 应改为 'going' 和 'having'。

× However I go, I will take this list and remind me not to forget important things.

✓ However I go, I will take this list and remind myself not to forget important things.

'remind' 后面应接反身代词，表示提醒自己，故 'me' 应改为 'myself'。