Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then support it with specific examples using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I have a strong long-term memory. For instance, when I place my keys somewhere, I always remember their exact location, which helps me avoid losing them.

提案: Your response is repetitive and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and finish your sentences properly to make your answer more effective.

例: I rarely forget important things because I try to be careful. However, once I forgot my favourite sunglasses in a hotel room, but I remembered them later and was able to retrieve them.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Try to avoid repetition and complete your thoughts fully to make your response more natural and effective.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule, especially the times when I have to drop my son at school and pick him up from his swimming and football classes. These appointments are very important to me.

提案: Your answer is good but incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas and complete your sentences. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy.

例: I usually write down important information in my diary or phone to help me remember. For example, I note down birthdays and anniversaries, which are very important to me, so I don't forget them.

× I think so. Uh, yes. I'm good at memorizing the things because I have long term memory.

✓ I think so. Uh, yes. I'm good at memorizing things because I have long-term memory.

The phrase 'the things' is incorrect here because 'things' is a general plural noun and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'long term' should be hyphenated as 'long-term' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× So yes, I can not forget the things easily.

✓ So yes, I cannot forget things easily.

The phrase 'the things' is incorrect because it refers to things in general, so the definite article 'the' is unnecessary. Also, 'cannot' is one word, not two.

× Where I can put the stuff I can remember.

✓ Where I put the stuff, I can remember it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies that the speaker can remember where they put the stuff, using proper word order and adding 'it' as the object of 'remember'.

× For example I put the key somewhere I can remind where I can.

✓ For example, I put the key somewhere and I can remember where I put it.

The verb 'remind' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'remember'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and incomplete; adding 'and' and completing the thought improves clarity.

× Mostly not. I won't forget the things mostly especially important to me.

✓ Mostly not. I don't usually forget things, especially those important to me.

The use of 'won't' (will not) is incorrect here because it expresses future refusal, which is not intended. The present simple 'don't usually forget' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'the things mostly' is awkward; 'things' without 'the' and 'usually' is better.

× Sometimes I forget.

✓ Sometimes I forget.

This sentence is correct as it is; no correction needed.

× For example, I forget one of my favorite sunglasses in the hotel room, which I remember later.

✓ For example, I forgot one of my favorite sunglasses in the hotel room, which I remembered later.

The action happened in the past, so the past tense 'forgot' and 'remembered' should be used instead of present tense 'forget' and 'remember'.

× But yeah, this is.

✓ But yeah, this is what happened.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'what happened' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× I have to remember my daily schedule every time when I have to drop my son in the school or when I have to pick him up from his swimming class or his football class.

✓ I have to remember my daily schedule every time I have to drop my son at school or pick him up from his swimming class or football class.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'school'; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, 'every time when' is redundant; 'every time' alone is sufficient.

× So these timings I have to remember every day in my daily life and most importantly.

✓ So I have to remember these timings every day in my daily life, and most importantly...

The sentence is awkwardly structured. Moving 'these timings' after 'remember' improves clarity. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding ellipsis indicates continuation.

× I mostly note down the important things on my diary or on my phone so that I can remember.

✓ I mostly note down important things in my diary or on my phone so that I can remember them.

The correct preposition with 'diary' is 'in', not 'on'. Also, adding 'them' at the end clarifies the object of 'remember'.

× For example birth dates or anniversary dates which are very important for my special one.

✓ For example, birth dates or anniversary dates which are very important to my special one.

The correct preposition is 'important to someone', not 'important for someone'.

× I have to note it down on my note Terry so that I can easily remember them without.

✓ I have to note them down in my notepad so that I can easily remember them.

'Note Terry' is incorrect; likely intended 'notepad'. Also, 'note down' takes plural object 'them' referring to multiple dates. The sentence ends abruptly with 'without' which is incomplete and removed.