Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但部分句子结构重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议避免重复使用“I remembered”，可以用更多不同的表达方式来丰富语言。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. Since childhood, I've developed a habit of remembering important details about my family, such as their birthdays, hobbies, and daily routines. This ability helps me retain information effectively over the long term.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但存在少量语法和用词错误，如“sleeps my mind”不地道。建议注意用词准确性，避免出现不自然的表达。

例: I rarely forget important things because I plan ahead and organize my schedule carefully. For instance, I use reminders and to-do lists to make sure nothing slips my mind. This approach helps me stay reliable, and people often trust me with important tasks.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构，避免使用疑问句形式表达陈述内容，并且补充具体细节使内容更丰富。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many details about the person I take care of during the summer vacation. For example, I keep track of her wake-up and bedtime, as well as her food preferences and daily routines.

提案: 回答表达较为口语化且重复，缺乏多样的词汇和句型。建议使用更正式和多样的表达方式，同时减少重复。

例: I remember important things by focusing carefully and committing them to memory. For more complex or critical information, I usually take notes on my phone to ensure I don't forget anything.

× I formed this habit of memorizing things when I was little.

✓ I formed this habit of memorizing things when I was little.

此句中动词形式正确，无需修改。

× I remembered every detail of my family.

✓ I remembered every detail of my family.

此句中动词时态正确，符合过去时描述过去的动作，无需修改。

× I remembered about their birthdays, hobbies, and lifestyles.

✓ I remembered their birthdays, hobbies, and lifestyles.

动词remember后不需要介词about，去掉about更符合英语习惯。

× And it's very easy for me to keep a long term memory as well.

✓ And it's very easy for me to keep long-term memory as well.

long term应为复合形容词long-term，且memory前不加冠词a，因为memory是不可数名词。

× I rarely forget anything important because I always plan ahead and organise my schedule carefully.

✓ I rarely forget anything important because I always plan ahead and organize my schedule carefully.

organise拼写为英式英语，若使用美式英语应为organize。此处非语法错误，视地区习惯选择。

× For example, I use reminders and A to do list to ensure nothing sleeps my mind.

✓ For example, I use reminders and a to-do list to ensure nothing slips my mind.

“A to do list”中“to do”应连字符连接为“to-do”，且“sleeps my mind”错误，应为“slips my mind”，意为“忘记”。

× This habit helps me stay reliable and people often trust me to handle important tasks.

✓ This habit helps me stay reliable, and people often trust me to handle important tasks.

此句缺少逗号连接两个独立分句，添加逗号使句子结构更清晰。

× I need to remember the details of my system more because I have to take care of for the whole summer vacation and I remember when will she wake up?

✓ I need to remember the details of my system more because I have to take care of her for the whole summer vacation, and I remember when she will wake up.

“take care of for”中“for”多余，应去掉；疑问句“when will she wake up?”在陈述句中应改为“when she will wake up”。

× I remember when will she go to bed and I will remember what does she like to eat, so, et cetera.

✓ I remember when she will go to bed, and I will remember what she likes to eat, and so on.

同上，疑问句改为陈述句；“what does she like to eat”改为“what she likes to eat”；“et cetera”口语中常用“and so on”更自然。

× I remember important things by having a firm memory in my heart.

✓ I remember important things by having a firm memory in my heart.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I remember them with all my heart, seriously.

✓ I remember them with all my heart, seriously.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× And if something is really complex and important, I also take notes on my app on my phone to make sure that I never forget them.

✓ And if something is really complex and important, I also take notes on my app on my phone to make sure that I never forget it.

前文提到“something”为单数，代词应使用单数“it”，而非复数“them”。