Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, you can say, "No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget small items like where I put my keys, even though I try to use trackers to help me."

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put small items like my keys, even though I use trackers to help me remember.

提案: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain the situation. Also, be careful with grammar and word order. For example, you can say, "Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday when I was a child. Her birthday is on 15th August, but I forgot the date even though I promised to remember it and celebrate together."

例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday when I was a child. Her birthday is on 15th August, but I forgot the date even though I promised to remember it and celebrate together.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more organised and clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar mistakes. For example, you can say, "My daily life is hectic, so I rely on my phone to remember meetings and deadlines. I check emails and messages regularly, and I use calendar and tracker apps to keep track of important dates."

例: My daily life is hectic, so I rely on my phone to remember meetings and deadlines. I check emails and messages regularly, and I use calendar and tracker apps to keep track of important dates.

提案: Your answer is understandable but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say, "I set reminders and calendar alerts on my phone, so I receive notifications that help me remember important things easily. This method works very well for me."

例: I set reminders and calendar alerts on my phone, so I receive notifications that help me remember important things easily. This method works very well for me.

× No, I'm not really good in that, but when I'm trying to I forgot I'm using the trackers and everything.

✓ No, I'm not really good at that, but when I'm trying to, I forget I'm using the trackers and everything.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency when talking about habitual actions.

× A small thing like key I forgot where I have.

✓ A small thing like a key, I forget where I have it.

The noun 'key' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency. Additionally, the sentence needs 'it' to refer to the key.

× Yes my best friend birthday I forgot when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I forgot my best friend's birthday when I was a child.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'My best friend birthday' should be 'my best friend's birthday' to show possession. The verb 'forgot' is correctly in past tense here.

× My best friend birthday is in 15th August and I just forgot the date but I promised to her I will remember the date and we will celebrate it all.

✓ My best friend's birthday is on 15th August, and I just forgot the date, but I promised her I would remember the date and we would celebrate it all.

The correct preposition for dates is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'promised to her' should be 'promised her'. The future tense 'will' is changed to 'would' to maintain past tense consistency after 'promised'.

× In my daily life it's hectic but because of my phone I remember the daily meetings and deadlines and we have to check our phones for emails, messages and yeah for mails.

✓ In my daily life, it's hectic, but because of my phone, I remember the daily meetings and deadlines, and we have to check our phones for emails, messages, and mails.

The sentence needed commas for clarity. 'Emails' and 'mails' are both acceptable, but 'mails' is less common; however, it's acceptable here. No major preposition errors, but punctuation improves clarity.

× I have cited tracker and calendar for the dates.

✓ I have set trackers and a calendar for the dates.

The word 'cited' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'set'. Also, 'tracker' should be plural 'trackers' if referring to multiple, and 'a calendar' needs an article.

× I have set my phone that wise, like I have set calendars strikers in my phone.

✓ I have set my phone that way, like I have set calendar reminders on my phone.

'That wise' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'that way'. 'Calendars strikers' is incorrect; likely meant 'calendar reminders'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to something on a device.

× So I get notification on my phones and easy to remember all these things.

✓ So I get notifications on my phone, and it's easy to remember all these things.

'Notification' should be plural 'notifications' to match the context. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' as the speaker likely refers to one device. Added 'it's' for sentence completeness.