Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「memory things」ではなく「memorizing things」と言うべきです。また、話の流れが不明瞭で、内容が繰り返されて冗長になっています。より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけ、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習をしましょう。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things. When I was in high school, I often had many tests, so I used my smartphone to check the test schedule instead of trying to remember it.

提案: 回答が繰り返しや言い間違いが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。話の構成を整理し、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べる練習が必要です。また、文法的な正確さも向上させましょう。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times. For example, once I forgot the date of a meeting with my girlfriend.

提案: 内容は伝わりますが、表現が不自然で繰り返しが多いです。より自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。

例: I need to remember English vocabulary and grammar because English is very important for my studies at university.

提案: 文法的な誤りと意味の不明瞭さがあります。例えば「I have to run English」は意味が通じません。正しい表現を使い、具体的な方法を明確に説明する練習をしましょう。

例: To remember important things, I write English words and phrases many times. This helps me memorize them better.

× Actually, I'm not good at memory things because when I was a high school student, there are many tests during the test period and I each time I want to check the schedule the test, I open the smartphone and check the.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorising things because when I was a high school student, there were many tests during the test period and each time I wanted to check the test schedule, I opened my smartphone and checked it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there are' instead of 'there were' to describe past events, which is a 'There be issue'. Also, 'memory things' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'memorising things'. The verb tenses should be consistent in the past tense to match the time frame. Additionally, 'the smartphone' should be 'my smartphone' for natural English.

× Yes, I've forgotten many times since my childhood the one thing the one thing when I when one thing I forgot about that is the date with my girlfriend.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten many times since my childhood. One thing I forgot was the date with my girlfriend.

The original sentence is confusing and repetitive. The past perfect 'I've forgotten' is acceptable, but the sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. Simplifying the sentence and using 'was' to refer to the specific forgotten event improves clarity and correctness.

× It is to learn about English. The English is especially important in my university. So it is remembering the English is quite important for me in my daily life.

✓ It is learning English. English is especially important at my university. So remembering English is quite important for me in my daily life.

'Learn about English' is unnatural; 'learning English' is correct. 'The English' is incorrect; 'English' as a language does not take 'the'. Also, 'at my university' is the correct preposition. The phrase 'it is remembering the English' is awkward; 'remembering English' is better.

× In my case I have to run English, so I I remember then to write many times the phrases or words and I remember the English things.

✓ In my case, I have to study English, so I remember by writing phrases or words many times, and I remember English things.

'Run English' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'study English'. The phrase 'I remember then to write many times' is awkward; 'I remember by writing phrases or words many times' is clearer. Also, 'the English things' is unnatural; 'English things' is better.