Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地直接回答问题，并用一两个具体细节支持观点。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, but my method is different from others. For example, I prefer to associate information with images, which helps me remember better.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，且句子结构不完整。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明。

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important. However, I sometimes forget small daily tasks like where I put my keys.

提案: 回答内容不明确，表达混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议直接说明日常需要记住的事情，并用连词连接句子。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and deadlines. Therefore, I make lists to keep track of these important tasks.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但句子稍显简单。建议使用更多连接词丰富表达，使回答更连贯。

例: I usually set reminders on my phone or Google Calendar because they help me remember important events and deadlines easily.

× The answers will be yes, but also be no.

✓ The answer will be yes, but also no.

句子结构不完整，'also be no'缺少主语，导致表达不清晰。应简化为'The answer will be yes, but also no.'，使句子完整且通顺。

× That that is because the way I like, the way I tend to remember right things is more different like other people's.

✓ That is because the way I like, the way I tend to remember things is different from other people's.

句子结构混乱，重复使用'that'且表达不清晰。'more different like'用法错误，应改为'different from'。调整后句子更符合英语表达习惯。

× But it's hard to.

✓ But it's hard to explain.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致意思不明确。补充完整谓语动词'explain'，使句子完整。

× No, I more often forget something on our daily little things in daily life, but instead of important things.

✓ No, I more often forget little things in daily life, but not important things.

句子结构混乱，'something on our daily little things'表达不当，应简化为'forget little things in daily life'，并用'but not important things'表达对比，更符合英语习惯。

× Well, I train actually, I train myself to to meet the status last days.

✓ Well, I actually train myself to meet deadlines.

句子结构混乱，'to to meet the status last days'表达错误且不通顺。应改为'train myself to meet deadlines'，更准确表达意思。

× I don't need to remember those kind of little things in my life.

✓ I don't need to remember those kinds of little things in my life.

'those kind of'用法错误，复数名词前应使用'those kinds of'，以保持数的一致性。

× Well, I tend to set the reminder on my phone or Google Calendar for those important things in case that I forgot.

✓ Well, I tend to set reminders on my phone or Google Calendar for those important things in case I forget.

'forgot'为过去式，句意表达的是一般现在时的习惯动作，应使用现在时'forget'。此外，'the reminder'改为复数形式'reminders'更符合习惯用法。