Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“can't phone”应为“can't focus”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，避免使用错误词汇，并使表达更流畅自然。

例: I used to be good at memorising things when I was in high school, but now I find it difficult to focus and often forget things easily.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以通过增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节描述。建议使用更多连接词如“so”、“therefore”等，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I once forgot to refund my train ticket because I decided to take a plane instead. Unfortunately, I realized this a few days later after the train had already departed, so I ended up losing a lot of money.

提案: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误，如“doctor's diapers”应为“doctor's orders”或“patient's diapers”，且表达不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，避免用词错误，并使句子更简洁明了。

例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, but the most important is to change my grandmother's diapers regularly to prevent skin irritation and discomfort.

提案: 回答简洁且内容具体，但可以通过增加连接词使句子更流畅自然。建议适当使用连接词如“so”或“which helps me to”来增强表达的连贯性。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down, especially on my cell phone, which helps me to organize and review them regularly.

× I just can't phone, really feel confused and easily forgot things.

✓ I just can't focus, really feel confused and easily forget things.

这里的'phone'应为'focus'，因为原句中想表达的是无法集中注意力。'forgot'应改为'forget'，因为前面用了'can'，后面动词应为原形。

× I once forgot to refund the train ticket because I decided to take a plane instead.

✓ I once forgot to refund the train ticket because I had decided to take a plane instead.

这里的'decided'应使用过去完成时'had decided'，因为它发生在另一个过去动作'forgot'之前。

× the first thing popped up in my mind is changing my doctor's diapers regularly because if you don't change it at certain frequency, she may develop skin irritation and discomfort.

✓ the first thing that popped up in my mind is changing my doctor's diapers regularly because if you don't change them at a certain frequency, she may develop skin irritation and discomfort.

'thing'前缺少关系代词'that'。'diapers'是复数，指代时应使用复数代词'them'，而不是单数'it'。

× if you don't change it at certain frequency

✓ if you don't change it at a certain frequency

'certain frequency'前应加不定冠词'a'，表示某种频率。

× which can help me to organize the things and review them regularly.

✓ which can help me organize things and review them regularly.

'help'后面不需要加'to'，直接用动词原形。'the things'改为'things'更自然。