Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且直接，但缺少具体细节和连接词，建议增加具体例子或原因，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Actually, I don't think I'm very good at memorising things because I tend to forget more now than when I was younger. For example, I often forget where I put my keys, which can be quite frustrating.

提案: 回答直接且内容具体，但句子结构稍显简单，建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, of course. The last time I forgot something important was when I forgot to pick up my brother after his classes, so he had to come back home by himself, which worried me a lot.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但语法错误影响表达，建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使句子更自然。

例: Actually, I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as turning off the electricity, locking the door, and picking up my phone and ID cards before leaving the house.

提案: 回答内容具体且有文化背景支持，表达较自然，但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually write things down to remember important tasks because, in my country's culture, there is a saying that a good memory is not as good as writing things down, which helps me stay organized.

× Actually a lot I need to remember to turn off the electricity, lock the door and picked up my phone and ID cards and so on.

✓ Actually a lot I need to remember to turn off the electricity, lock the door and pick up my phone and ID cards and so on.

这里的动词短语需要保持时态一致，前面是动词原形（to turn off, lock），后面也应该用动词原形pick up，而不是过去式picked up。因为这是描述日常需要做的事情，使用动词原形更合适。