Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
Yes, I'd like to say that I have a good memory, especially when it comes to the things I am pretty interested in. I can remember many details for a long time, like several years, as long as I paid a particular attention.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, definitely. There was one time I forgot to bring my ID card to the airport when I was going to take airplane for my work trip and the security won't accept online digital ID so I called the police to help me.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Well, since I am not working or studying at school at this moment, there are very few things I need to remember in everyday life, such as my schedule on medicine. But I used to keep track of my response.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Well, to be frank, I basically memorize with my brain. I use repetition and mental association to enhance my memory. However, these years I've started to set reminders on my phone too.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“paid a particular attention”应为“pay particular attention”。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Yes, I have a good memory, especially for things that interest me. For example, I can remember details for several years if I pay close attention. This helps me recall important information easily.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答内容具体，但表达不够连贯，且有语法错误，如“take airplane”应为“take a flight”，以及“won't accept”时态不当。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来连接句子，并注意时态和冠词的正确使用。
例: Yes, I once forgot my ID card at the airport when I was taking a flight for a work trip. Because the security did not accept digital ID, I had to call the police for help.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中“schedule on medicine”和“keep track of my response”表达不清晰，且缺少连接词。建议明确表达药物服用时间，并用连接词连接句子，使内容更具体和连贯。
例: Currently, I don't have many things to remember daily because I am not working or studying. However, I need to remember to take my medicine on time. In the past, I used to keep track of my tasks carefully.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答较为自然且内容完整，但开头“to be frank”略显口语化且不必要。建议使用更正式的表达，并用连接词如“also”替代“however”以增强连贯性。
例: I usually remember important things by using repetition and mental association. I also set reminders on my phone to help me keep track of tasks.
文法
× I can remember many details for a long time, like several years, as long as I paid a particular attention.
✓ I can remember many details for a long time, like several years, as long as I pay particular attention.
这里的时态应与前文保持一致，且 'attention' 是不可数名词，前面不需要加冠词 'a'。应使用现在时 'pay' 来表达习惯性动作。
× the security won't accept online digital ID so I called the police to help me.
✓ the security wouldn't accept online digital ID so I called the police to help me.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情，表示过去的否定可能性，应该使用情态动词的过去式 'wouldn't'，而不是现在时 'won't'。
× there are very few things I need to remember in everyday life, such as my schedule on medicine.
✓ there are very few things I need to remember in everyday life, such as my medicine schedule.
'schedule on medicine' 结构不自然，应该改为 'medicine schedule'，即 '药物时间表'。
× But I used to keep track of my response.
✓ But I used to keep track of my responses.
'response' 应为复数形式 'responses'，表示多次或多项回应。
× Well, to be frank, I basically memorize with my brain.
✓ Well, to be frank, I basically memorize things with my brain.
动词 'memorize' 需要宾语，'with my brain' 作为方式状语不合适，应补充宾语 'things'。
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