Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: I used to be good at memorising things, but now I find it more difficult.

提案: 回答重复且不够具体，建议直接回答问题并提供具体例子，避免使用多余的填充词。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I left my wallet at home when I went out.

提案: 回答含糊且缺乏具体内容，建议明确回答问题并举例说明日常需要记住的具体事项。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments, deadlines, and important tasks to stay organized.

提案: 回答基本清晰，但语法有误，建议使用正确的时态和句型，并适当扩展细节。

例: I usually write important things in my planner so that I don't forget them.

× When was Kate I would go at memorizing things but now I don't good at.

✓ When I was Kate, I would be good at memorizing things but now I'm not good at it.

句子中时态使用错误，原句中 'was Kate' 可能是想表达过去的某个时间，且动词形式不正确。应使用过去时态 'was' 来描述过去的状态，并且 'don't good at' 结构错误，应该用 'I'm not good at it'。建议注意动词时态和固定搭配的正确使用。

× Uh, yes, I have ever forgotten something important. Uh, for example, when I get out I forget something important.

✓ Uh, yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, when I go out, I forget something important.

'have ever forgotten' 用法不正确，正确表达为现在完成时 'have forgotten'。另外，'when I get out' 应为 'when I go out'，动词时态和用词错误。建议学习现在完成时的正确用法和常用动词短语。

× About this question, I don't know how to say. In my daily life, I need to remember something important. I think yes.

✓ About this question, I don't know how to answer. In my daily life, I need to remember important things. I think so.

'don't know how to say' 结构不自然，应该用 'don't know how to answer'。'something important' 应用复数 'important things' 更符合语境。'I think yes' 应改为 'I think so'。建议注意句子结构和固定表达的正确使用。

× About things I will write down in my planner and then the important things would not forgotten.

✓ For important things, I will write them down in my planner so that they will not be forgotten.

原句中 'would not forgotten' 结构错误，缺少被动语态的助动词 'be'，且时态应为将来时 'will not be forgotten'。另外，句子结构不完整，建议使用完整的因果关系句式。建议加强对情态动词和被动语态的理解。