Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“memory something”应为“memorising things”。建议注意动词形式和搭配，避免语法错误，同时可以用更连贯的连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I would say that recently I have become quite good at memorising things, especially topics that interest me. I find that understanding the material, rather than just repeating it, helps me retain information better. Moreover, I use tools like note-taking and flashcards to assist my memory.

提案: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误，如“didn't write down it”应为“didn't write it down”。建议注意词序和句子结构，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed a project deadline because I didn't write it down. This experience taught me the importance of always keeping a record of important dates and tasks.

提案: 回答中有表达不清和词汇使用错误，如“very things”应为“various things”，“paying pills”应为“taking pills”。建议加强词汇准确性和句子表达的清晰度。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember various things such as work-related tasks, appointments, and personal development goals. I also have to take care of routine responsibilities like taking medication and keeping in touch with my friends and family.

提案: 回答结构合理，但存在词汇和表达不准确的问题，如“write down some text and deadline”不够具体。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达，并适当使用连接词增强连贯性。

例: To remember important things, I use several methods. I keep a daily planner where I write down tasks and deadlines, and I also use digital tools like calendar apps and phone reminders. Additionally, I create associations or mental links to help me recall information that is harder to remember.

× I would say I'm recently good at memory something, especially when it comes to topics that interest me.

✓ I would say I'm recently good at memorising something, especially when it comes to topics that interest me.

这里动词短语应使用动名词形式，'good at'后面应接动名词，不能用名词'memory'。应改为'memorising'。

× I forgot an important deadline for a project because I didn't write down it.

✓ I forgot an important deadline for a project because I didn't write it down.

动词短语'write down'是及物动词短语，宾语应放在动词和副词之间，不能放在后面。应改为'write it down'。

× In my daily life, I need to remember very things such as work related texts, appointments and personal growth.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember many things such as work related texts, appointments and personal growth.

'very'用法错误，修饰可数名词复数时应使用'many'，表示数量多。

× I also need to remember to take care of routine responsibilities like paying pills and staying in touch with my friends and family members.

✓ I also need to remember to take care of routine responsibilities like taking pills and staying in touch with my friends and family members.

'paying pills'用法错误，正确表达是'taking pills'，表示服药。

× I keep a daily planner to write down some text and deadline, and also use digital tools like calendar apps and reminders on my phone.

✓ I keep a daily planner to write down some texts and deadlines, and also use digital tools like calendar apps and reminders on my phone.

'text'和'deadline'应使用复数形式，表示多条信息和多个截止日期。