Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些矛盾，开头说自己不擅长记忆，但后面又说通过写笔记来帮助记忆，建议开头直接说明自己通过写笔记来弥补记忆力不足，表达更自然。同时，句子结构有些不流畅，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write detailed notes when preparing for exams. This method helps me review more easily and remember the material better.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，且内容不具体，缺少具体例子和细节，导致表达不清晰。建议使用正确的语法，给出具体的遗忘事情的例子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, last weekend I forgot to attend a meeting because I was very busy and stressed.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“the knowledge learn”应为“the knowledge learned”，且表达略显笼统。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，具体说明需要记住的内容，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as the knowledge I learn from my studies and important tasks like appointment deadlines. Therefore, I always keep track of my schedule carefully.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“by write”应为“by writing”，且句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的语法，补充完整句子，并用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down. For example, I keep notes in my phone's note app, which helps me to recall tasks easily.

× Yes, I'm not good at memorizing things so I usually write them down to remember them.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things so I usually write them down to remember them.

这里的回答与问题不符，问题是询问是否擅长记忆，回答中使用了否定形式，应该用肯定或否定明确回答。虽然这不是严格的语法错误，但为了符合语境，建议改为“No”。

× For example, when I prepare for exams, I usually make detailed notes in advance which helps me easier to review and retain.

✓ For example, when I prepare for exams, I usually make detailed notes in advance which helps me review and retain more easily.

这里“helps me easier to review”中“easier”用作副词不正确，应该用副词形式“more easily”来修饰动词“review”。

× Yes, definitely, although I can't remember a specific things, I guess it have happened before.

✓ Yes, definitely, although I can't remember a specific thing, I guess it has happened before.

“a specific things”中“things”是复数，与前面的不定冠词“a”不匹配，应改为单数“thing”。

× Yes, definitely, although I can't remember a specific things, I guess it have happened before.

✓ Yes, definitely, although I can't remember a specific thing, I guess it has happened before.

主语“it”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而不是复数“have”。

× I always forget things when I am busy or stressful.

✓ I always forget things when I am busy or stressed.

“stressful”是形容词，表示“令人有压力的”，而这里应描述人的状态，正确用词是“stressed”，表示“感到压力的”。

× In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of things like the knowledge learn from my studies and the essential tasks like deadlines for appointments for example.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of things like the knowledge learned from my studies and essential tasks like deadlines for appointments, for example.

“knowledge learn”中“learn”应为过去分词“learned”，用作形容词修饰“knowledge”。

× I usually remember things by write them down.

✓ I usually remember things by writing them down.

介词“by”后应接动名词形式，故“write”应改为“writing”。

× For example, I usually keep a small note towards my phone's note app to record the things this method helps me to.

✓ For example, I usually keep a small note in my phone's note app to record things; this method helps me.

“keep a small note towards my phone's note app”中“towards”用法不当，应改为“in”表示“在手机的记事本应用里”。此外，句子后半部分结构不完整，需调整。