Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复且句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing because I am studying nursing, which requires me to remember a lot of information for exams.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议完整表达经历，并说明具体做法。

例: Yes, I once forgot an important appointment, which caused me to miss it. Since then, I always set reminders on my iPhone to avoid forgetting important things.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不流畅。建议使用正确语法，列举具体事项，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember assignments, meetings with friends, and the times to take my medicine.

提案: 回答不完整且有重复，表达不清晰。建议完整说明方法，避免重复，并使用连接词。

例: I use my iPhone to set reminders for important tasks, and sometimes I ask my family or friends to remind me as well.

× Oh yes, I had forgotten something important that made me lose something important.

✓ Oh yes, I forgot something important that made me lose something important.

这里使用过去完成时（had forgotten）不合适，因为句子中没有其他过去的动作需要先于此动作发生。应使用一般过去时（forgot）来表达过去发生的动作。

× So after that I have I always remember the important things on my on my iPhones in order to.

✓ So after that, I always remember the important things on my iPhone in order to.

句中“have”多余且不符合语法，应删除。此外，“iPhones”应为单数形式“iPhone”，因为通常指个人的手机。

× There are so many things I need to remember in my daily life such as the assignments, the dating with friends and the and the time should to take medicine to and so on.

✓ There are so many things I need to remember in my daily life such as assignments, dates with friends, and the time I should take medicine, and so on.

“the dating with friends”用法不当，应改为“dates with friends”；“the time should to take medicine to”结构错误，应改为“the time I should take medicine”。此外，冠词使用不当，去掉不必要的“the”。

× I have my message to help me remember important things.

✓ I have messages to help me remember important things.

“message”应为复数形式“messages”，因为通常指多条信息；此外，句意表达为“我有信息帮助我记住重要的事情”，使用复数更合适。

× One is that I will make reminders on my iPhones in order to remind me on time and the other is that I will I will ask for help for.

✓ One is that I will make reminders on my iPhone in order to remind me on time, and the other is that I will ask for help.

“iPhones”应为单数“iPhone”；“ask for help for”结构错误，去掉最后的“for”。此外，句子中重复“I will”应去掉一个。