Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节，避免重复和冗长。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. When I was a child, my parents encouraged me to study regularly, which helped improve my memory.

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误明显，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明，避免使用不准确的词汇。

例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important so far because I usually write down important tasks to remember them.

提案: 回答中有停顿词和不必要的填充词，影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用连词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的细节。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study plans and the phone numbers of my family and close friends to stay connected.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，清楚描述记忆方法，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually use my phone to record important tasks. Before starting, I check my to-do list to make sure I don't forget anything.

× Yep, of course I always remember that lots of things when I was a young kid and I think my good memories because my parents always let me to study a lot.

✓ Yep, of course I always remembered lots of things when I was a young kid and I think my good memories are because my parents always let me study a lot.

这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词应该用过去式。'remember' 应改为 'remembered'。另外，'let me to study' 中 'let' 后面不加 'to'，应改为 'let me study'。

× my parents always let me to study a lot.

✓ my parents always let me study a lot.

动词 'let' 后面直接跟动词原形，不需要加 'to'。这是固定用法。

× No, I haven't made that occasion because now I'm so young and always I have a good memorial and I don't think I have forgotten something important.

✓ No, I haven't had that occasion because now I'm still young and I always have a good memory and I don't think I have forgotten something important.

'made that occasion' 用法不当，应该用 'had that occasion' 表示经历过某事。'memorial' 是纪念碑的意思，应该用 'memory' 表示记忆。

× always I have a good memorial

✓ I always have a good memory

副词 'always' 应放在主语之后，动词之前。'memorial' 用错，应为 'memory'。

× what the telephone number of my family members and my best friend.

✓ what the telephone numbers of my family members and my best friend are.

句子缺少谓语动词，且 'telephone number' 应为复数 'telephone numbers'，并且需要补充 'are' 来完成句子结构。

× what the telephone number of my family members and my best friend.

✓ what the telephone numbers of my family members and my best friend are.

这是一个宾语从句，缺少谓语动词 'are'，导致句子结构不完整。

× I always recognize the phone and to do the list.

✓ I always check the phone and do the list.

'recognize the phone' 用法不当，应改为 'check the phone' 表示查看手机。'to do the list' 结构错误，应改为 'do the list' 或更自然的表达 'check the list'。