Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然流畅。可以直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly. For example, I might remember something one day but forget it the next.

提案: 回答时注意语法准确，句子结构清晰。可以用连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明原因和结果。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, like my friend's birthday. Since I am very busy, I sometimes forget special dates, which makes my friend unhappy.

提案: 回答时注意语法和用词准确，句子应完整且连贯。可以具体说明计划如何帮助记忆。

例: I need to make a plan every day because it helps me remember my tasks and priorities clearly.

提案: 回答应简洁明了，避免重复和语法错误。可以具体说明使用哪些工具和方法来记忆重要事情。

例: I usually set reminders on my phone and write notes to help me remember important tasks.

× I think I'm not good at memorizing things because I usually forget a lot of things.

✓ I think I'm not good at memorizing things because I usually forget many things.

这里“a lot of things”虽然不算错误，但用“many things”更符合正式表达，且“things”是可数名词复数，使用“many”更合适。

× Like yesterday I said that, but today I don't remember that.

✓ Like yesterday I said that, but today I don't remember it.

这里“that”作为代词指代前文内容，改为“it”更自然。

× Yes, of course I have ever forgotten something important, especially is my friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, of course I have forgotten something important, especially my friend's birthday.

“have ever forgotten”用法不当，正确用法是“have forgotten”；“especially is my friend's birthday”中“is”多余，应去掉。

× Because I'm so busy I don't have a lot of time, so that's why I don't remember.

✓ Because I'm so busy, I don't have much time, so that's why I don't remember.

“a lot of time”改为“much time”更符合不可数名词时间的表达习惯。

× So it's make her unhappy.

✓ So it makes her unhappy.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“makes”。

× I think I must making a plan.

✓ I think I must make a plan.

情态动词“must”后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。

× This can help me remember in my daily life, Yes.

✓ This can help me remember things in my daily life, yes.

“remember”后应有宾语，补充“things”使句子完整。

× And it can remind me what I can do, what I have to.

✓ And it can remind me what I can do and what I have to do.

句子缺少连词“and”连接两个并列部分，且“have to”后应补动词“do”。

× I think I have to I have to set a scheduler schedule and make a happy take note or use some applications to not about important things.

✓ I think I have to set a schedule and make a happy note or use some applications to note important things.

句子重复“I have to”，应去掉一个；“scheduler schedule”重复，应改为“schedule”；“make a happy take note”表达不当，应改为“make a happy note”；“to not about important things”语法错误，应改为“to note important things”。

× What I have to do?

✓ What do I have to do?

疑问句缺少助动词“do”，应改为“What do I have to do?”。