Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: No, I find it quite challenging to memorise things, especially numbers and unfamiliar topics. However, images are easier for me to remember because I can visualise them vividly and associate them with different concepts.

提案: Your response is relevant and mostly clear, but the linking word 'however' is used incorrectly here. Use 'but' or 'although' to contrast ideas more naturally. Also, be careful with plural forms and article usage.

例: I've occasionally forgotten things, but it rarely happens because I always jot down meetings and schedules in my calendar.

提案: Your answer covers relevant content but is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to organise your ideas clearly and avoid repeating similar phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I need to remember things related to my work and daily responsibilities, such as meetings, urgent tasks, shopping items, and bills to pay at home. These are very important to me.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use articles correctly ('a To-Do list'), and choose the right verb ('mark' instead of 'market'). Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I use several methods to remember important things. For daily routine tasks, I prefer making a To-Do list to remind myself. However, for important meetings and schedules, I mark them on my calendar so I can see them clearly.

× However, images is easier easier for me to remember because I can just put them in my mind vividly and then I can associate them with different things.

✓ However, images are easier for me to remember because I can just put them in my mind vividly and then I can associate them with different things.

The subject 'images' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. Also, the word 'easier' was repeated twice, so one instance should be removed for clarity.

× I've experienced forgetting things occasionally, however it rarely happens to me.

✓ I've experienced forgetting things occasionally; however, it rarely happens to me.

Although the sentence is mostly correct, a semicolon or period is needed before 'however' to properly separate the two independent clauses. This is a punctuation issue related to sentence structure rather than tense, but it improves clarity.

× This is because I always tend to jot down the meetings and schedule on my calendar.

✓ This is because I always tend to jot down the meetings and schedule in my calendar.

The correct preposition to use with 'calendar' is 'in' rather than 'on' because items are recorded inside the calendar, not on its surface.

× This is because I always tend to jot down the meetings and schedule on my calendar.

✓ This is because I always tend to jot down the meetings and schedules in my calendar.

The word 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' to match 'meetings' and to correctly refer to multiple entries.

× For daily routines tasks, I prefer making To Do List to remind me for daily tasks.

✓ For daily routine tasks, I prefer making a To Do List to remind me of daily tasks.

The phrase 'daily routines tasks' should be 'daily routine tasks' as 'routine' is an adjective here. Also, 'remind me for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'remind me of'. Additionally, 'To Do List' should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× However, for some important meetings and schedules, I prefer market on my calendar so that I can see it very clearly.

✓ However, for some important meetings and schedules, I prefer to mark them on my calendar so that I can see them very clearly.

The verb 'market' is incorrect; it should be 'mark'. Also, 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive 'to mark'. The preposition 'on' is correct here. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'meetings and schedules'.