Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence and correct verb tenses for clarity.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my phone or keys, which makes me struggle to find them every day.

提案: Your answer provides relevant content but is incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' to sound more natural.

例: Yes, recently I forgot my best friend's birthday. We have known each other since childhood and studied together. I felt really embarrassed about forgetting such an important day, so I apologized to her the next day.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid repeating words, and finish your sentences. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember small events like family gatherings, friends' birthdays, and other special occasions. To keep track, I often set alarms or reminders on my phone.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and filler words. Try to speak more fluently by avoiding fillers and use correct verb tenses. Also, organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I usually set alarms or reminders on my smartphone to avoid forgetting important things. Sometimes, I also make notes about special events, like when a baby is born in my family, to remember the exact date.

× I always forgot to forget to where I kept things like where I kept my phone or my keys or my wallet.

✓ I always forget where I kept things like my phone, my keys, or my wallet.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'forgot' (past tense) when the intended meaning is a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'forget'. Also, 'forgot to forget to' is redundant and incorrect. The correction uses the simple present tense to indicate a habitual problem.

× So it always just I always struggling to find those small things for me in my daily basis.

✓ So I am always struggling to find those small things in my daily life.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary verbs. 'I always struggling' should be 'I am always struggling' to form the present continuous tense. 'In my daily basis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my daily life'.

× So I'm not a like like a really.

✓ So I'm not really like that.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words. The correction completes the thought and removes redundancy for clarity.

× Yes, recently I forgot my friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, recently I forgot my friend's birthday.

This sentence is correct as it uses the past tense 'forgot' appropriately to describe a past event.

× She's my best friend. We are together from my childhood, we studied together, we uh, completed our graduations together but uh, last time I forgot her birthday and uh, I really feeling uh, I really felt embarrassed after forgetting her birthday

✓ She's my best friend. We have been together since childhood, we studied together, and we completed our graduations together, but last time I forgot her birthday and I really felt embarrassed after forgetting her birthday.

'We are together from my childhood' is incorrect; the present perfect 'have been together since childhood' is appropriate. 'I really feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'I really felt' to match the past tense context.

× So on the next day when her.

✓ So on the next day when her birthday came, I apologized to her.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object. The correction completes the sentence logically.

× In my daily life I have to remember the the small events that are coming in my in my family like my family or my friends and even birthday or any if a small occasion or event that are that is coming.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember the small events that are coming up in my family, like birthdays or any small occasion or event.

The sentence has redundant words ('the the'), incorrect pluralization ('birthday' should be 'birthdays'), and awkward phrasing. The correction removes redundancy, corrects plural forms, and improves clarity.

× So I have to keep track all of these small things in my mind and have to sometime put some alarms or.

✓ So I have to keep track of all these small things in my mind and sometimes set alarms or reminders.

The phrase 'keep track all of' is incorrect; it should be 'keep track of all'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence was incomplete and is completed for clarity.

× I always set alarm on my smart phone or sometime put reminders on my phone so I didn't forgot, forget anything.

✓ I always set alarms on my smartphone or sometimes put reminders on my phone so I don't forget anything.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Didn't forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'don't forget' to match the present habitual action. Also, 'alarm' should be plural 'alarms' to match 'set'.

× But uh, sometime I have to make a small note as well in my phone whenever umm, like, uh, something happening like some uh, in from, in my relatives, if any baby born.

✓ But sometimes I have to make a small note on my phone whenever something happens, like if a baby is born in my relatives.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. The phrase 'something happening like some uh, in from, in my relatives' is unclear and corrected to 'something happens, like if a baby is born in my relatives' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I have to keep it in notes that which day.

✓ So I have to keep a note of the date.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct expression.