Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, I'm really poor at remembering things. I go over the same stuff again and again. A few days later I forgot everything.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, I usually forgot the important things such as family's birthday, the things I need to buy, the time of the classes. There are so many similar things.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Family's birthday, the time of classes, the thing I need to buy. My memory is like a stick knot.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I try to look at them a lot, like I learn new English words I put I write them on the sticky note and put them on the wall door of my desk.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，语言更自然流畅。可以简洁直接地表达记忆力不佳，并用具体例子支持。
例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often have to review information several times because I tend to forget it quickly.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中语法需注意时态一致，内容应更具体，避免泛泛而谈。
例: Yes, I have forgotten important things like my family's birthdays, shopping lists, and class schedules because I have many similar tasks to remember.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答应更完整，避免断句不连贯。比喻应更清晰，且用词准确。
例: In my daily life, I need to remember my family's birthdays, class times, and shopping lists. Sometimes, my memory feels tangled like a knot, making it hard to recall everything.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 68.0提案: 回答应更流畅，避免语法错误，且表达更具体。
例: I try to remember important things by reviewing them frequently. For instance, when I learn new English words, I write them on sticky notes and place them on my desk or door to see them often.
文法
× A few days later I forgot everything.
✓ A few days later I forgot everything.
此句中“forgot”是过去式，符合上下文时间表达，无需修改。
× Yes, I usually forgot the important things such as family's birthday, the things I need to buy, the time of the classes.
✓ Yes, I usually forget the important things such as family birthdays, the things I need to buy, the time of the classes.
“usually”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”而非过去式“forgot”。此外，“family's birthday”应改为复数“family birthdays”以表达多个家庭成员的生日。
× Yes, I usually forgot the important things such as family's birthday, the things I need to buy, the time of the classes.
✓ Yes, I usually forget the important things such as family birthdays, the things I need to buy, the time of the classes.
“family's birthday”应改为复数形式“family birthdays”，因为通常指多个家庭成员的生日。
× Family's birthday, the time of classes, the thing I need to buy.
✓ Family birthdays, the time of classes, the things I need to buy.
“Family's birthday”应改为复数“Family birthdays”，且“the thing I need to buy”应改为复数“the things I need to buy”，因为通常有多件物品需要购买。
× I try to look at them a lot, like I learn new English words I put I write them on the sticky note and put them on the wall door of my desk.
✓ I try to look at them a lot. When I learn new English words, I write them on sticky notes and put them on the wall or door of my desk.
原句中“like I learn new English words I put I write”结构混乱，应拆分为两个句子，且“sticky note”应为复数“sticky notes”，“wall door”应分开为“wall or door”。
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