Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget information quickly. For example, I try to use small notes to help me remember, but sometimes it still doesn't work well.

提案: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clearer expression. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain the situation and its result. Also, be careful with word choice and grammar.

例: Yes, I once forgot that I had a meeting with my professor at university, which was a bad experience. Since then, I always add important meetings to my calendar to avoid forgetting them.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Provide a clear topic sentence and add specific examples of what you need to remember daily. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember meeting times, appointments, and important tasks. For example, I often have to remember deadlines for work or school.

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'um' and 'uh'. Give a clear and concise answer with specific methods you use to remember important things. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I usually use my notes and calendar apps, such as Google Calendar, to remember important things like meetings and events. This helps me stay organized and not forget important dates.

× No, I'm not. I'm not good at memorizing things because I don't know. I don't know why, but my memory is ever since died, every time died, I was trying to memorize something with little notes and something like this.

✓ No, I'm not. I'm not good at memorizing things because I don't know why, but my memory has been bad ever since. Every time I try to memorize something, I use little notes and things like that.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'ever since died' and 'every time died' which are not proper past tense or present perfect forms. The phrase 'my memory has been bad ever since' correctly uses the present perfect tense to indicate a condition continuing from the past to the present. Also, 'every time I try to memorize' is the correct present tense form to describe habitual action.

× Yes, of course it was time when I forward that I had a meeting with my. Professor at university and it was really bad experience, but after this I am always taking it to my calendar.

✓ Yes, of course. There was a time when I forgot that I had a meeting with my professor at university, and it was a really bad experience, but after that I always put it in my calendar.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'forward' instead of 'forgot' (past tense of forget). Also, 'it was really bad experience' lacks an article; it should be 'a really bad experience.' The phrase 'after this I am always taking it to my calendar' is incorrect; the correct form is 'after that I always put it in my calendar' to express habitual action in the present.

× In my daily life, I need to remember some meeting times. I need to remember some.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember some meeting times.

The second sentence 'I need to remember some.' is incomplete and unclear. The first sentence correctly uses the plural 'meeting times' to indicate multiple events. The second sentence should be omitted or completed for clarity.

× Umm, I use, uh, my notes and calendar, uh, like goldmates and et cetera for remember important things like meetings, some important events and etcetera.

✓ Umm, I use my notes and calendar, like Google Calendar and so on, to remember important things like meetings and some important events.

The phrase 'for remember' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to remember' using the infinitive after 'use.' Also, 'goldmates' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'Google Calendar.' The phrase 'and etcetera' is redundant; 'etcetera' alone suffices. Prepositions and word choice have been corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.