Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains redundancy and incomplete sentences. Try to be more concise and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid unnecessary fillers and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: Yes, I have a good memory. For example, I can easily remember dates, numbers, and people's names and faces without much effort.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clear and correct sentence structures and provide a logical flow with linking words.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. Since we are very close, I felt terrible and made sure to apologize sincerely.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly using linking words to connect your points.

例: In my daily life, I use my smartphone to help me remember important tasks. For example, I set reminders and alarms, and I also use a calendar app to organize my schedule.

提案: Your answer is very hesitant and lacks fluency. Try to reduce filler words and speak more confidently. Also, organize your answer with clear sentences and linking words.

例: I usually use my smartphone to remember important things. Specifically, I use calendar apps to keep track of tasks and set reminders to make sure I don't forget anything.

× I often recall many people's name and face without much effort and.

✓ I often recall many people's names and faces without much effort.

The nouns 'name' and 'face' should be plural ('names' and 'faces') because they refer to multiple people. Using singular forms here is incorrect when talking about more than one person.

× Yes, I have forgotten important before.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things before.

The sentence is missing a noun after 'important'. Adding 'things' clarifies the object of forgetting. Also, 'have forgotten' is correct present perfect tense to indicate past experience.

× I feel I absolutely felt terrible about it that we are very close and so I made sure to apologize.

✓ I absolutely felt terrible about it because we are very close, so I made sure to apologize.

The phrase 'I feel I absolutely felt terrible' is redundant and confusing. Using 'I absolutely felt terrible' is sufficient. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'because' to show cause-effect relationship. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper conjunction use.

× Use a cell phone for remember in my daily life and I set reminder and alarm for asks that I need to do.

✓ I use a cell phone to remember things in my daily life, and I set reminders and alarms for tasks that I need to do.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used before 'remember'; it should be 'to remember'. 'Reminder' and 'alarm' should be plural as multiple can be set. 'Asks' is incorrect; the correct word is 'tasks'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I use a calendar app for tasks I use smart.

✓ And I use a smart calendar app for tasks.

The phrase 'I use smart' is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to 'smart calendar app' to make sense. Also, the sentence is simplified for clarity.

× I usually use a calendar apps, uh, to keep track of tasks or I use or, excuse me, or I, I set some reminders for, uh, remind.

✓ I usually use a calendar app to keep track of tasks, or I set some reminders to help me remember.

'Calendar apps' should be singular 'calendar app' when preceded by 'a'. The phrase 'set some reminders for remind' is incorrect; it should be 'set some reminders to help me remember' for clarity and correctness.