Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích chi tiết hơn.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. However, if something is important in my life, I make sure to remember it. For less important things, I usually forget them easily.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, when I feel tired or upset, I sometimes forget important appointments or tasks.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: In daily life, I need to remember tasks I have to complete and meetings I must attend. For example, I always try to remember the time of my classes so I don't miss them.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn cách bạn ghi nhớ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: If I have important things to remember for a long time, I try to memorize them. However, if I feel tired, I usually take notes on my phone or write reminders in my car.

× I think it's not, I'm, I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ I think I'm not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'I think it's not' is incorrect because 'it' does not refer to anything specific here. The correct expression is 'I think I'm not good at memorizing things.' This corrects the sentence structure and adjective use.

× Umm, something in, in my life.

✓ Umm, something in my life.

The repetition of the preposition 'in' is incorrect. Only one 'in' is needed before 'my life' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× If it's, uh, important, I, I will remember it, But uh, something is not necessary to, to remember.

✓ If it's important, I will remember it, but some things are not necessary to remember.

The sentence had incorrect use of 'something' and capitalization errors. 'Something' should be 'some things' to refer to plural items, and 'But' should be lowercase 'but' as it continues the sentence.

× So I don't good at it.

✓ So I'm not good at it.

The phrase 'I don't good at it' is incorrect because 'good' is an adjective and needs a linking verb like 'am' to connect it to the subject. The correct form is 'I'm not good at it.'

× I think yes I have because in my life there are there are a lot of are things to, to or to occur.

✓ I think yes, I have because in my life there are a lot of things that happen.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear phrasing. Removing duplicates and clarifying 'things to, to or to occur' to 'things that happen' improves clarity and grammar.

× So if the day I feel tired or upset I I maybe forget or something important.

✓ So if on a day I feel tired or upset, I may forget something important.

The phrase 'I I maybe forget or something important' is incorrect. 'Maybe' should be 'may' as a modal verb, and 'or' is unnecessary. Also, 'on a day' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Umm, I think we should, uh, remember some things like, umm, they are, they're a complete task or some meetings we, we have to, we have to attend.

✓ Umm, I think we should remember some things like completed tasks or meetings we have to attend.

The phrase 'they are, they're a complete task' is incorrect. It should be 'completed tasks' to describe things to remember. Also, removing repeated words improves clarity.

× For example, when we, they try give me a send to go class, we should.

✓ For example, when they try to send me to class, we should remember.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Correcting the structure to 'when they try to send me to class' and completing the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× If I have a important things I I remember it's too long.

✓ If I have important things, I remember them for a long time.

The article 'a' is incorrect before plural 'things'. Also, 'it's too long' is unclear; 'remember them for a long time' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× But sometime I feel not good.

✓ But sometimes I don't feel well.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'I feel not good' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I don't feel well.'

× I I will I will take notes in my telephone or or my car.

✓ I will take notes on my phone or in my car.

Repeated words 'I I will I will' should be reduced to 'I will'. Also, 'take notes in my telephone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my phone'.