Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够自然，语法和用词有误，且表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用简单句表达原因。

例: No, I'm not good at memorising things because I often forget important details.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: Yes, I once forgot my mum's birthday because I was very tired after working all day.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，缺少具体内容。建议明确说明需要记住的具体事项，并用完整句子表达。

例: I need to remember where I put my things because I often forget if I put them on the bed or in the drawers.

提案: 表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议使用正确的句子结构，清楚描述记忆方法，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I write down important things on a note and pin it where I can see it every morning. Then, I read it aloud to remind myself.

× No, I'm not good at memoirs because I also forget something like when one day I will forget something like that.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things because I also forget things, like one day I will forget something like that.

这里'memoirs'（回忆录）用错了，应该用'memorising things'（记忆东西）。同时，'something'应改为复数'things'，因为表示泛指多件事物。

× Yes, I've forgotten my mum birthday because for the last day I'm working I'm so very tired so the next day I forget her birthday.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten my mum's birthday because on the last day I was working, I was very tired, so the next day I forgot her birthday.

时态错误，描述过去的事情应使用过去时态，如'was working'和'forgot'。另外，'mum birthday'缺少所有格，应为'mum's birthday'。

× I need to remember my because I always forget my put in where when I go to shower I'll forget my put in the bed or put in the drawers.

✓ I need to remember where I put my things because I always forget. When I go to shower, I'll forget where I put them, whether in the bed or in the drawers.

句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，缺少明确的宾语。需要明确指出'remember where I put my things'，并用'where'引导地点状语。

× I will write down the important thing in my and pin it on the top and start aloud in everyday morning. It can Remember Me something important things I need to do.

✓ I will write down the important things and pin them at the top, then read them aloud every morning. It can remind me of the important things I need to do.

句子结构混乱，缺少宾语和介词，'start aloud'应为'read aloud'，'Remember Me'应为'remind me'，并且'important thing'应为复数形式。