Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
To be honest, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget important items. For instance, when I participate in outdoor activities, I sometimes leave my case behind, which cause inconvenience. This happens because I tend to get distracted easily.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Definitely, I regularly forget the important items, just like in the morning when I need to take part in my IELTS exam. I forgot my student IDID card in the hotel so I have to back to my home.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
In my daily life I need remember many important things. For instance, sometimes I need finish my practice about English and after that I need do some cleaner.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Uh, at that moment, I prefer to do some list in my phone. Uh, it, it really helps me to remember some important items. Umm, for instance, I can make a study schedule and the time management management schedule in my.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 70.0提案: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够连贯。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
例: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often get distracted. For example, when I go hiking, I sometimes forget to bring my backpack, which causes inconvenience.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子较长且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，并使用连接词使表达更清晰。
例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, on the morning of my IELTS exam, I forgot my student ID card at the hotel, so I had to go back to get it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议加强基本语法练习，使用完整句子，并用连接词连接观点和细节。
例: In my daily life, I need to remember many important tasks. For example, I have to finish my English practice and then do some cleaning.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中有重复词和不完整句子，表达不清晰。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，并具体说明方法以增强表达效果。
例: I usually make lists on my phone to remember important things. For example, I create a study schedule and a time management plan, which help me stay organized.
文法
× which cause inconvenience.
✓ which causes inconvenience.
主语是单数的"which"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"causes"，否则会出现主谓不一致的错误。
× I forgot my student IDID card in the hotel so I have to back to my home.
✓ I forgot my student ID card in the hotel so I had to go back to my home.
句子中描述的是过去发生的事情，动词"have"应使用过去式"had"，并且"back to my home"缺少动词，应改为"go back to my home"。
× I need remember many important things.
✓ I need to remember many important things.
动词"need"后面应接不定式"to remember"，缺少"to"导致句子不完整。
× sometimes I need finish my practice about English and after that I need do some cleaner.
✓ sometimes I need to finish my English practice and after that I need to do some cleaning.
动词"need"后应接不定式"to finish"和"to do"，"practice about English"表达不自然，应改为"English practice"，"cleaner"是名词，句中应使用动名词"cleaning"表示做清洁的动作。
× I prefer to do some list in my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.
"do some list"表达错误，正确用法是"make a list"，并且"in my phone"应改为"on my phone"。
× I can make a study schedule and the time management management schedule in my.
✓ I can make a study schedule and a time management schedule on my phone.
句子缺少冠词"a"，重复了"management"，并且"in my"不完整，应改为"on my phone"。
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