Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，避免语法错误和冗余。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember my friends' birthdays and important events from my childhood.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节说明情况，保持句子完整。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. Once, I went to the airport but forgot my passport, which caused a lot of trouble.

提案: 回答较为简单，表达有些不自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like my ID numbers. For example, today is my IELTS exam day, so I made sure to prepare my exam card.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体方法说明，避免语法错误。

例: I usually make a list to remember important things. Also, I tell my friends about them so they can remind me if I forget.

× Definitely yes, I think my mind is very well because I can clearly remember that my childhood happens on things and I usually think my friend's birthday's date and in the.

✓ Definitely yes, I think my mind is very good because I can clearly remember things from my childhood and I usually remember my friend's birthday date.

这里“my mind is very well”中的“well”应改为形容词“good”，因为“mind”是名词，需要形容词修饰。句中“my childhood happens on things”表达不清，应改为“things from my childhood”更符合英语表达习惯。句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× Definitely yes. I still remember that when I go. When I went to the airport I forgot my passport, but my parents and I arrived in the airport, so my.

✓ Definitely yes. I still remember that when I went to the airport, I forgot my passport, but my parents and I arrived at the airport.

句中“when I go”应使用过去时“when I went”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。介词“in the airport”应改为“at the airport”，因为“arrive at”是固定搭配。句子末尾不完整，应删去多余部分。

× In my daily life, I always remember my ID numbers and my important item state such as today is my IELTS exam day so I can prepare my card.

✓ In my daily life, I always remember my ID numbers and the status of my important items, such as today being my IELTS exam day, so I can prepare my card.

“important item state”表达不准确，应改为“the status of my important items”。“such as today is my IELTS exam day”应改为“such as today being my IELTS exam day”，使句子结构更自然。

× Sometimes I your I usually make a list or tell my friends. This thing is very important for me so I ask there can TC can tell me?

✓ Sometimes I usually make a list or tell my friends. This thing is very important to me, so I ask them to remind me.

句子中“Sometimes I your I usually”结构混乱，应删去“your I”。“ask there can TC can tell me?”表达不清，应改为“ask them to remind me”，使句子通顺且符合语法。