Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a good memorizing person'. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I think I have a good memory. For example, I can easily remember people's names and important dates like birthdays, which helps me stay connected with friends and family.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó giải thích chi tiết hơn với các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. However, I usually use a calendar app to organize my daily tasks, so I don't feel overwhelmed and can remember my responsibilities better.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh những câu không liên quan. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu cú rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to maintain a healthy lifestyle. For instance, I set reminders on my phone to drink enough water, exercise regularly, and eat nutritious food.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually remember important things by using technology. For example, I take notes on my phone and set notifications for important tasks, which helps me prioritize and complete them on time.

× I consider myself a good memorizing person to be honest.

✓ I consider myself a good memorizer to be honest.

The word 'memorizing' is a verb in the -ing form used incorrectly as an adjective here. The correct noun form to describe a person who memorizes well is 'memorizer'.

× Sometimes I can remember the information via the birthday, the phone numbers or the name of some people that I just met once time.

✓ Sometimes I can remember information like birthdays, phone numbers, or the names of some people that I just met once.

'Information' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match the plural context. 'Name' should be plural 'names' to agree with 'some people'. 'Once time' is incorrect; 'once' alone is sufficient.

× Most of the time I usually use calendar to make plans by using it as I can take know what activities I should do in each day and can prevent from overwhelmed.

✓ Most of the time I usually use a calendar to make plans because I can know what activities I should do each day and can prevent feeling overwhelmed.

The noun 'calendar' needs the indefinite article 'a'. The phrase 'take know' is incorrect; 'know' alone is correct. 'In each day' should be 'each day'. 'Prevent from overwhelmed' is incorrect; it should be 'prevent feeling overwhelmed'.

× Most of the time I usually use calendar to make plans by using it as I can take know what activities I should do in each day and can prevent from overwhelmed.

✓ Most of the time I usually use a calendar to make plans because I can know what activities I should do each day and can prevent feeling overwhelmed.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used with 'prevent'. The correct structure is 'prevent feeling overwhelmed' without 'from'.

× In daily life, I believe that we should maintain a healthy lifestyle because of the development of technology. I usually use my phone to take note and says notification reminder to have enough milk, do exercise regularly and drink it.

✓ In daily life, I believe that we should maintain a healthy lifestyle because of the development of technology. I usually use my phone to take notes and set notification reminders to have enough milk, exercise regularly, and drink it.

'Take note' should be plural 'take notes'. 'Says notification reminder' is incorrect; it should be 'set notification reminders'. 'Do exercise regularly' is better as 'exercise regularly'.

× I usually use my phone to take note and says notification reminder to have enough milk, do exercise regularly and drink it.

✓ I usually use my phone to take notes and set notification reminders to have enough milk, exercise regularly, and drink it.

The verb 'says' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct verb is 'set' to match the subject and context.

× Uh, because of the development of technologies, I believe that's my fault. A useful tool to take notes and set notification reminder for each activities. By using it I can prioritize the significant task and.

✓ Uh, because of the development of technologies, I believe that's my fault. I use a useful tool to take notes and set notification reminders for each activity. By using it, I can prioritize significant tasks.

The sentence 'A useful tool to take notes...' is a fragment and lacks a verb. It should be a complete sentence with a subject and verb. 'Notification reminder' should be plural 'notification reminders'. 'Each activities' should be 'each activity'. The last sentence is incomplete and should be completed properly.