Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid trailing off. Use clear and simple language to explain your methods, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a direct answer, then briefly explain your method with linking words.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I practice meditation exercises. These help me transfer information from my short-term memory to my long-term memory. For instance, I meditate daily to improve my focus and retention.

提案: Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with specific examples using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

例: Not really, I rarely forget important things because I always plan ahead. For example, before travelling, I make detailed checklists to ensure I don't miss anything.

提案: Avoid repeating words and unclear phrasing. Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. For instance, I make notes about my home education schedule to keep track of my studies.

提案: Complete your sentences fully and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear examples.

例: Usually, I remember important things by writing them in my diary. Additionally, I tell my family members, like my sister, to help me remember important information.

× Yes, actually I'm good at memorizing things because I follow some meditational exercises to memorize things from my short term memory to long term memory and I think it's the.

✓ Yes, actually I'm good at memorizing things because I follow some meditation exercises to memorize things from my short term memory to long term memory and I think it's effective.

The word 'meditational' is incorrect here; the correct noun form is 'meditation'. Also, the sentence was incomplete, so adding 'effective' completes the thought clearly.

× Not really, because for instance, I had planned everything, everything before my traveling or before I arrived, arrived some place and I think I.

✓ Not really, because for instance, I planned everything before my traveling or before I arrived at some place and I think I did well.

The past perfect 'had planned' is unnecessary here; simple past 'planned' fits better. Also, 'arrived, arrived some place' is repetitive and missing a preposition; corrected to 'arrived at some place'. The sentence was incomplete, so 'I think I did well' completes it.

× In my opinion, I think we need to remember our our day-to-day activities that we can't normally memorize them memorize like making some notes about our home education.

✓ In my opinion, I think we need to remember our day-to-day activities that we can't normally memorize, like making some notes about our home education.

The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and causes redundancy after 'activities'. Removing 'them' improves clarity and correctness.

× Usually I prefer to memorize things by writing them in my diary and also telling to someone that I. That I mostly loved like family member or to my sister sometimes.

✓ Usually I prefer to memorize things by writing them in my diary and also telling someone that I mostly love, like a family member or sometimes my sister.

The preposition 'to' after 'telling' is incorrect; 'tell someone' does not require 'to'. Also, 'loved' should be 'love' to match present tense. Added 'a' before 'family member' for correctness.