Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“easily to forget”应为“easily forget”。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，避免重复表达。

例: It depends on what I need to memorize. For instance, I'm good at remembering English vocabulary, but I often forget everyday things like shopping lists.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节使内容更具体。

例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which was really embarrassing. I felt terrible because it showed I didn't pay enough attention to important dates.

提案: 回答中应避免重复表达，如“what I need to do in the whole day”可简化。可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I need to remember my daily routines and important deadlines so that I can complete my assignments on time.

提案: 回答中应注意冠词使用，如“a to do list”而非“A to do list”。句子结构可以更自然，避免重复“remember”。

例: I use several methods to remember important things. For example, I write a to-do list every morning and set reminders on my phone for important appointments.

× I would easily to forget like shopping.

✓ I would easily forget things like shopping.

这里的错误是动词后不应该加不定式的“to”，正确用法是直接用动词原形。建议去掉“to”，使句子符合英语语法。

× I will write A to do list in the morning to help me remember.

✓ I will write a to-do list in the morning to help me remember.

“to do list”应写作复合词“to-do list”，且首字母不应大写。建议改为“a to-do list”，符合英语习惯。

× so that my phone will remember some important appointments.

✓ so that I will remember some important appointments.

手机不会“记住”事情，应该是“我”记住。这里代词使用错误，需将“my phone”改为“I”。