Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，影响了表达的自然流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can quickly remember numbers and words, which helps me in my studies.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且补充具体细节使内容更丰富。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot to bring my phone when shopping at a supermarket, which was very embarrassing.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议先明确主题句，然后用连贯的句子详细说明需要记住的具体事项。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to drink enough water, watch my favorite TV series, and practice speaking English every evening.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达并使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时补充更多细节说明方法的效果。

例: Honestly, I write down all the important things on a piece of paper. Whenever I forget something, I check the list, which helps me stay focused and organized.

× I I can remember some numbers or some words very quickly.

✓ I can remember some numbers or some words very quickly.

句子中重复了“I”，属于多余的词语，应删除一个以保持句子简洁。

× That's that means I think I have the talent in remembering things.

✓ That means I think I have the talent for remembering things.

短语中“talent”后应接介词“for”表示“擅长于”，而不是“in”。

× Sometimes I had forget brought my phone with me.

✓ Sometimes I forgot to bring my phone with me.

“had forget brought”是错误的时态和动词形式，应使用过去式“forgot”加不定式“to bring”表示过去忘记带手机。

× I lost my phone that's very embarrassing when I shopping in a supermarket and sometimes forget some simple things like washing my clothes or uh, do some.

✓ I lost my phone; that's very embarrassing when I am shopping in a supermarket, and sometimes I forget some simple things like washing my clothes or doing some chores.

“when I shopping”缺少助动词，应为“when I am shopping”；“forget”前缺少主语“I”；“do some”不完整，应补充具体内容或改为“doing some chores”。

× To kick off, I think I should. I think I should need to remember water and see a series or a film.

✓ To kick off, I think I need to remember to drink water and watch a series or a film.

“should need to”表达重复且不自然，应简化为“need to”；“remember water”不完整，应为“remember to drink water”；“see a series”应改为“watch a series”。

× Honestly, I I have a paper that I write all the thing I should remember on it and when I forget the thing I should do today I just bring out my take out my paper and look at what I need to do that helps me stay focused and.

✓ Honestly, I have a paper on which I write all the things I should remember, and when I forget what I should do today, I just take out my paper and look at what I need to do. That helps me stay focused.

“a paper that I write all the thing I should remember on it”结构不清，应改为“a paper on which I write all the things I should remember”；“bring out my take out my paper”重复，应简化为“take out my paper”；句子末尾不完整，应补充完整句子。