Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
To be honest, I don't think I'm very good at memorizing things. For example, I struggle to remember faces and names. Also, I often forget my keys. I think that's mainly because there are too many things in my mind.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Of course not. Although I have a terrible memory, I will write something important on my notebook or record them on my smartphones to avoid forgetting them.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Because of the student's responsibilities, I often need to remember the schedules every day and clearly remember the homework deadline.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Because of my absolutely terrible memory, I rely heavily on the technology. My smartphone is indispensable. I often write the reminders on the to avoid forgetting something.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但缺少更具体的细节和逻辑连接词，且部分表达略显重复。建议在回答中使用连接词如“for instance”或“because”，并提供更具体的例子来丰富内容。
例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often have too many thoughts at once. For instance, I struggle to remember people's names and faces, which can be embarrassing sometimes.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答直接但略显简单，缺少连接词和更具体的细节。建议使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”，并举例说明具体忘记过什么重要事情以及如何避免。
例: I have forgotten important things before, so I always write them down in my notebook or record reminders on my smartphone to make sure I don't forget.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中语法有误，表达不够自然，且缺少连接词和具体细节。建议改进句子结构，使用连接词如“such as”，并具体说明需要记住的内容。
例: As a student, I need to remember my daily schedule, such as class times and homework deadlines, to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和不完整句子，表达不够流畅。建议完善句子结构，使用连接词如“therefore”，并具体说明如何使用手机帮助记忆。
例: Because I have a poor memory, I rely heavily on technology. Therefore, I use my smartphone to set reminders and alarms so I don't forget important tasks.
文法
× Because of the student's responsibilities, I often need to remember the schedules every day and clearly remember the homework deadline.
✓ Because of the students' responsibilities, I often need to remember the schedules every day and clearly remember the homework deadlines.
这里'student's'是单数所有格，但句意应指多个学生的责任，故应使用复数所有格'students''。此外，'homework deadline'应为复数形式'deadlines'，因为通常有多个作业截止日期。
× I often write the reminders on the to avoid forgetting something.
✓ I often write the reminders on it to avoid forgetting something.
句中缺少介词宾语，'on the'后应接具体名词或代词。这里应使用代词'it'指代前文提到的智能手机，完整表达为'on it'。
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