Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达。可以直接回答问题并用具体例子支持，同时注意语法和用词准确。

例: I am quite good at memorising personal experiences because they are meaningful to me. However, I find it challenging to remember academic information unless I review it regularly.

提案: 回答应更直接回应问题，避免语法错误和表达不清。可以具体说明忘记了什么重要的事情，并用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten some important memories from my childhood. For example, I lost contact with my best friends from primary school after moving to senior high school, and I regret not keeping in touch.

提案: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免口语填充词。可以用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks and appointments. If I forget something, it disrupts my schedule and makes me feel uneasy because I like to complete everything on time.

提案: 回答应更连贯，避免断句和重复。可以用连词连接句子，并具体说明写日记如何帮助记忆。

例: I usually write important things down in a diary. This helps me remember good experiences and daily events because writing them makes the memories clearer and easier to recall.

× If I have to memorize the good memories I have, I will remember it for a long time.

✓ If I have to memorize the good memories I have, I will remember them for a long time.

这里的it指代复数的memories，应该用复数代词them，属于代词使用错误，需注意代词与先行词的数一致。

× If I have to memorize the good memories I have, I will remember it for a long time.

✓ If I have to memorize the good memories I have, I will remember them for a long time.

代词it用来指代单数名词，但memories是复数，应该用them。

× If you ask me to learn to memorize the knowledge in study, I will forget it very quickly.

✓ If you ask me to learn to memorize the knowledge in my studies, I will forget it very quickly.

短语中study应使用复数形式studies，并且前面加上所有格my，表示“我的学习”，这是介词短语的正确用法。

× Since I went to the Senior High School, I couldn't keep in touch with them.

✓ Since I went to Senior High School, I haven't been able to keep in touch with them.

句子中使用了since引导的时间状语从句，主句应使用现在完成时态表示从过去持续到现在的状态，而不是过去时couldn't。

× I need to remember what to do every days.

✓ I need to remember what to do every day.

every day表示“每天”，day是单数形式，不能用复数days。

× If I forget one of the things uh it will broke my plan and make me uncomfortable because I don't like the sense of didn't finish what I asked me to do every day.

✓ If I forget one of the things, it will break my plan and make me uncomfortable because I don't like the feeling of not finishing what I am asked to do every day.

broke是break的过去式，条件句中应使用一般现在时break；sense用法不当，应改为feeling；didn't finish应改为not finishing，保持动名词形式；asked me to do应改为am asked to do，保持被动语态和现在时。

× I usually write down in the papers.

✓ I usually write things down on paper.

write down后面不需要介词in，且papers通常指多张纸，表达习惯用on paper表示“在纸上”。

× I love writing the diary very much.

✓ I love writing in my diary very much.

diary前应加所有格my，表示“我的日记”，且writing后面应加介词in，表示“写日记”。

× It's the most important thing to help me remember the good happening, the good memories and some things happened in my daily life.

✓ It's the most important thing to help me remember the good happenings, the good memories, and some things that happened in my daily life.

happening应使用复数形式happenings；some things后应加关系代词that引导定语从句修饰happened；保持句子结构完整。