Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的でわかりやすいですが、文法の誤り（"do many times"は不自然）や冗長な表現があります。より自然で効果的な表現に改善し、具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I often have to repeat them several times to remember.

提案: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な状況説明を加えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, when I was a child, I forgot a promise with my friend. She was very angry, but I apologized sincerely, so we are still good friends now.

提案: 内容は明確ですが、文が少し冗長で繰り返しがあります。接続詞を使い、より自然な表現にすると良いでしょう。

例: I need to remember my son's school schedule every day because he can't wake up by himself, so I have to remind him.

提案: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

例: I usually write important things in my schedule notebook. By doing this, I can remember them anytime because I always have it with me.

× I don't think so. I'm not good at memorizing things, so I have to do many times.

✓ I don't think so. I'm not good at memorizing things, so I have to do it many times.

The phrase 'do many times' is incomplete and incorrect. The verb 'do' needs an object to specify what is being done many times. Adding 'it' clarifies the action, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes I have, when I was a child I forgot promise with my friend, she was so angry but I very apologize so we are good friends now.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was a child, I forgot a promise with my friend. She was so angry, but I apologized a lot, so we are good friends now.

The sentence has multiple past tense errors: 'forgot promise' needs an article 'a promise'; 'I very apologize' is incorrect because 'apologize' should be in past tense 'apologized' and 'very' is not used with verbs. Also, punctuation is needed to separate clauses. Correcting these makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I need to remember my son's school schedule in my daily life because he can't wake up for himself, so I have to do it.

✓ I need to remember my son's school schedule in my daily life because he can't wake up by himself, so I have to do it.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect in the phrase 'wake up for himself.' The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate that he cannot wake himself up independently.

× I usually write down to my schedule note. By doing so I can. Remember anytime because I have always it.

✓ I usually write down in my schedule note. By doing so, I can remember anytime because I always have it.

The phrase 'write down to my schedule note' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate where the writing is done. Also, the sentence 'By doing so I can. Remember anytime because I have always it.' has punctuation and word order issues. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.