Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์มาก ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially during my university studies. For example, when preparing for exams, I often use flashcards to help me remember important information, which makes learning new languages easier.

提案: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสม ควรตอบโดยตรงและอธิบายเหตุผลหรือผลลัพธ์อย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before because I was overwhelmed with tasks and didn't manage my time well. Since then, I started using reminders and calendars to stay organized and avoid making such mistakes.

提案: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์มาก ควรตอบโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความต่อเนื่อง

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. To stay organized, I keep a to-do list which helps me be productive and avoid forgetting responsibilities. Additionally, I make sure to eat well and get enough sleep to maintain my health.

提案: คำตอบของคุณมีความพยายามดีในการอธิบายวิธีการจำ แต่มีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ไม่เหมาะสม ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง พร้อมเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหล

例: I usually use a planning app on my phone to remember important things. This method helps me organize my tasks and schedule my day so I don't forget any dates or appointments. Also, familiar information is easier for me to recall later.

× Yes, I consider myself for a good at university, for example, when staffing for exam, I'm used to taking a representative and making and I wish to help me with the information and disability of being the school, especially when I learn new language and prepare.

✓ Yes, I consider myself good at university, for example, when studying for exams, I'm used to taking notes and making summaries which help me with the information and difficulties of being at school, especially when I learn a new language and prepare.

The phrase 'consider myself for a good' is incorrect; 'consider myself good' is correct. 'Staffing for exam' should be 'studying for exams'. 'Taking a representative and making' is unclear; likely intended 'taking notes and making summaries'. 'Disability of being the school' is incorrect; 'difficulties of being at school' is appropriate. Prepositions like 'for' and 'at' were misused, leading to confusion.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important deposited in the missing because I was overwhelming the tech and didn't manage my child effective since then establishment remember reminder calendar Tuesday organized and avoid small mistake.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important because I was overwhelmed and didn't manage my time effectively. Since then, I have used reminders and calendars to stay organized and avoid small mistakes.

The sentence contains many unclear phrases and incorrect verb forms. 'Deposited in the missing' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Overwhelming the tech' should be 'overwhelmed'. 'Didn't manage my child effective' should be 'didn't manage my time effectively'. The sentence needed restructuring to correct past tense usage and clarity.

× My deadly wife is important to my number and stay organized management can effective for example keeping a do To Do List me productive taste and avoid for forgotten important responsibility additionally meaning maintaining after the last time I'll be eating well, I'm getting enough sleep is to feel for all of you.

✓ My daily life is important to me, and staying organized can be effective. For example, keeping a To-Do List helps me stay productive and avoid forgetting important responsibilities. Additionally, maintaining a healthy lifestyle by eating well and getting enough sleep helps me feel good overall.

'Deadly wife' is a mishearing or typo for 'daily life'. 'Number' is incorrect here. 'Stay organized management can effective' is incorrect; it should be 'staying organized can be effective'. 'Do To Do List me productive taste' is incorrect; it should be 'keeping a To-Do List helps me stay productive'. The sentence also misuses quantifiers and articles, leading to confusion.

× I usually remember in my panel you're saying Ishita app on my phone. This method helped me organize my tasks and set me my day so I don't forget my date or appointment. Additionally, information you're familiar often take is easy or if it's later.

✓ I usually remember things using a planning or scheduling app on my phone. This method helps me organize my tasks and plan my day so I don't forget my dates or appointments. Additionally, information that I'm familiar with is easier to remember, even if it's later.

'Remember in my panel you're saying Ishita app' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'remember things using a planning or scheduling app'. 'Set me my day' should be 'plan my day'. 'Information you're familiar often take is easy or if it's later' is unclear; corrected to 'information that I'm familiar with is easier to remember, even if it's later'. Prepositions and sentence structure were incorrect.