Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“People be talented at memory things”不符合英语习惯。建议你使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意时态和句子结构，使回答更流畅。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I found it especially difficult when I was in high school, trying to memorise English and Chinese texts.

提案: 回答中时态混乱且句子不完整，影响表达清晰度。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子，并且避免重复。

例: Yes, I have. Last Sunday, I planned to go out with my friend to take some wonderful pictures, but I forgot to bring my camera.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“It's tend to swipe the floor”不正确。建议使用正确的表达方式，并且提供更具体的细节。

例: I need to remember to do some housework, like washing my clothes and sweeping the floor, but I often forget to do these tasks.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

例: I think the best way to remember important things is to write them down and put the paper on my desk, so I can see it and remind myself regularly.

× People be talented at memory things.

✓ People are talented at memorizing things.

句中“People be”用法错误，正确应为“People are”，表示存在状态。且“memory things”应改为“memorizing things”，更符合表达习惯。

× I find it when I was a high school student and it's hard for me to memorize English and Chinese text.

✓ I found it hard when I was a high school student to memorize English and Chinese texts.

句中“find”应使用过去式“found”，因为描述的是过去的情况。

× Last Sunday I I'm playing.

✓ Last Sunday I was playing.

描述过去时间点的动作，应使用过去进行时“was playing”，而非现在进行时“I'm playing”。

× I'm planning to go out with my friend and take some wonderful picture, but I forget to bring my camera.

✓ I was planning to go out with my friend and take some wonderful pictures, but I forgot to bring my camera.

描述过去计划，应使用过去时“was planning”，且“picture”应为复数“pictures”，动词“forget”应为过去式“forgot”。

× take some wonderful picture

✓ take some wonderful pictures

“some”后应接复数名词，故“picture”应改为“pictures”。

× I need to remember some housework.

✓ I need to remember some housework tasks.

“housework”是不可数名词，若要表达具体事项，应加“tasks”或类似词。

× It's tend to swipe the floor, but I always don't remember it.

✓ I tend to sweep the floor, but I always forget to do it.

“It's tend”错误，应为“I tend”；“swipe”应为“sweep”；“always don't remember it”表达不自然，应改为“always forget to do it”。

× The best solution I think is write it down and put the paper on my desk.

✓ The best solution, I think, is to write it down and put the paper on my desk.

“is write”缺少不定式“to”，应为“is to write”；句中逗号有助于分隔插入语。

× In this case, I can look it and remind myself every time.

✓ In this case, I can look at it and remind myself every time.

“look”后应加介词“at”，构成短语“look at it”。