Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially important information, because I don't want to forget anything essential.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời hơi ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên thêm một câu giải thích hoặc ví dụ để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always make sure to write things down or set reminders.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trôi chảy hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'go shopping'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as going shopping, cooking meals, and completing my homework and tasks.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý, sửa lỗi và nói rõ các phương pháp bạn dùng để ghi nhớ.

例: I use several methods to remember important things. For example, I make lists on paper or type notes on my phone. Additionally, I sometimes do puzzles to improve my memory.

× Langley speaking.

✓ Langley speaking.

This phrase is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'This is Langley speaking' or 'Langley here' to correctly introduce oneself on the phone. However, since it does not fit the grammar problem types listed, no correction is made.

× I am good at memorizing things, especially some things important because I don't want to miss anything that I want.

✓ I am good at memorizing things, especially important things, because I don't want to miss anything I want.

The phrase 'some things important' is incorrect; the adjective 'important' should directly modify 'things' without 'some' or be placed before 'things'. Also, 'anything that I want' is redundant; 'anything I want' is sufficient. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my daily life I need to remember everything from shopping, go shopping to cooking.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember everything from shopping, going shopping to cooking.

The phrase 'from shopping, go shopping to cooking' mixes verb forms. 'Go shopping' should be changed to 'going shopping' to maintain parallel structure with 'shopping' and 'cooking'. Also, a comma after 'life' improves readability.

× Sometime I really need to remember my homework and my task.

✓ Sometimes I really need to remember my homework and my tasks.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'homework' which is plural in meaning. This corrects singular/plural agreement and adverb usage.

× Yeah, I had a lot of ways to remember important things.

✓ Yeah, I have a lot of ways to remember important things.

The present perfect or present tense 'have' is appropriate here because the speaker is talking about current methods. 'Had' implies past only, which is inconsistent with the context.

× I can make a list on a paper by paper or type it on the phones.

✓ I can make a list on paper or type it on my phone.

'On a paper by paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper'. Also, 'phones' should be singular 'phone' and possessive 'my phone' to indicate the device used. This corrects preposition and noun usage.

× Also. Yeah you can so puzzle to improve your memorized.

✓ Also, you can do puzzles to improve your memory.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect word forms: 'so puzzle' should be 'do puzzles', and 'memorized' should be 'memory'. The corrected sentence is complete and grammatically correct.