Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 주제 문장과 구체적인 예시를 포함해 답변을 완성하세요.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I tend to remember information like a picture in my mind. For example, when I study, I visualize the content to help me recall it later.

提案: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 긴장감을 표현하면서 구체적인 상황과 이유를 명확히 설명하는 문장을 구성하세요.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially during exams. I often get nervous, which makes it hard for me to remember the answers clearly.

提案: 답변이 중간에 끊기고 명확하지 않습니다. 일상에서 기억해야 할 구체적인 일과 그 방법을 명확하고 완전한 문장으로 표현하세요.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like sending emails and managing programs. To keep track, I write a To-Do List, which helps me stay organized and not forget important duties.

提案: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 플래너 사용 방법을 명확하게 설명하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

例: I usually use planners to remember important things. I have three planners: one for monthly plans, one for weekly tasks, and a daily to-do list. This system helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

× Hmm yes I think I'm good at memorizing about something because I remember everything like capture mode so I remember something like a picture so usually so I love.

✓ Hmm yes I think I'm good at memorizing things because I remember everything like capture mode; I remember something like a picture, so usually I love it.

The phrase 'memorizing about something' is incorrect because 'memorize' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'about'. Instead, 'memorizing things' is correct. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented and unclear; adding punctuation and connecting ideas improves clarity.

× Yes, I forgot. I forgot something very frequently, especially in exam.

✓ Yes, I forget. I forget things very frequently, especially in exams.

The question asks about a general experience, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate rather than past tense 'forgot'. Also, 'in exam' should be 'in exams' to indicate the general situation.

× I usually forget everything because the exam situation is very nervous to me and very.

✓ I usually forget everything because the exam situation makes me very nervous.

The phrase 'the exam situation is very nervous to me' is incorrect; 'nervous' describes a feeling experienced by a person, so the correct expression is 'makes me very nervous'. The original sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× Oh imagine my working situation. I had to do something very much like sending e-mail and managing the program.

✓ Oh, imagine my working situation. I have to do a lot of things like sending emails and managing programs.

'I had to do something very much' is incorrect; 'a lot of things' is the correct quantifier for multiple tasks. Also, 'sending e-mail' should be pluralized to 'sending emails' and 'managing the program' to 'managing programs' to indicate general tasks.

× So I have to write To Do List. So it is very helpful to.

✓ So I have to write a To-Do List. It is very helpful.

'To Do List' needs an article 'a' and hyphens to form 'To-Do List'. The phrase 'it is very helpful to' is incomplete; it should be 'It is very helpful.'

× I usually use planners so I have 3 planners, 1 is month monthly to 2nd is weekly. Finally I had day to the list so they made me don't.

✓ I usually use planners; I have three planners: one is monthly, the second is weekly, and finally, I have a daily list, so they help me not to forget.

Numbers should be written as words in formal writing. '1 is month monthly to 2nd is weekly' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'one is monthly, the second is weekly'. 'I had day to the list' is incorrect; it should be 'I have a daily list'. 'They made me don't' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'they help me not to forget'.