Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且简洁明了地表达观点。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important items like my keys or phone when I go out.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并举具体例子。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as a test day or my ID card.

提案: 句子结构不完整，表达重复且不流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，明确列出需要记住的事项。

例: I need to remember my daily schedule and to bring essentials like money and my phone when I go out.

提案: 回答不连贯，内容不明确。建议清晰说明记忆方法，并避免无关内容。

例: Now, I write important things in my notebook and place it near my bed so I can see it before I leave the house.

× No I really not good at memories of things because I always forget anything.

✓ No, I am really not good at memorising things because I always forget everything.

这里'memories'用错了，应该用动名词'memorising'表示记忆的动作，且'anything'在否定句中应改为'everything'，表示所有的东西都忘记了。

× Example when I go out the home maybe I will bring the key or phone or money or ID card.

✓ For example, when I go out of the house, maybe I will bring the key, phone, money, or ID card.

句子缺少连接词，且'the home'应改为'of the house'，列举时用逗号分隔更清晰。

× Yes, I think I always forget anything important because maybe I'll forget that day was a test or some important card forget to bring.

✓ Yes, I think I always forget important things because maybe I'll forget that there was a test that day or forget to bring some important card.

'forget anything important'应改为'forget important things'，'that day was a test'前应加'there'，'some important card forget to bring'语序错误，应调整为'forget to bring some important card'。

× I need to remember my schedule or I need to remember take the money, take the phone because I usually not always use using the phone in in outside.

✓ I need to remember my schedule or to take the money and phone because I don't always use the phone outside.

'remember take'应改为'remember to take'，'not always use using'重复且错误，应改为'don't always use'，'in in outside'重复且错误，应改为'outside'。

× And now I will take a note for for my notebook and I will bring it on my bed so when I go out I will see it too for my hobbies.

✓ Now I will take notes in my notebook and keep it on my bed so when I go out, I will see it. As for my hobbies...

'take a note for for my notebook'重复且用词不当，应改为'take notes in my notebook'，'bring it on my bed'应改为'keep it on my bed'，句子末尾'for my hobbies'不完整，需补充或分开表达。