Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite short and lacks clarity. Try to give a direct response first, then add a reason or example. Also, avoid using 'yeah' in formal speaking; use 'Yes' instead. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by repeating information several times.'

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by repeating information several times.

提案: Your answer is direct but could be improved by adding a specific example or reason. Also, the sentence structure can be smoother. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I have forgotten important things several times, such as missing appointments because I was too busy.'

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times, such as missing appointments because I was too busy.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, say, 'In my daily life, I need to remember several things, such as changing clothes once a day, watering my plants, and tidying up my belongings.'

例: In my daily life, I need to remember several things, such as changing clothes once a day, watering my plants, and tidying up my belongings.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear and structured response with linking words. For example, say, 'I usually remember important things by keeping them in my mind and setting alarms on my phone to remind me.'

例: I usually remember important things by keeping them in my mind and setting alarms on my phone to remind me.

× Yeah, sometimes I like to memorize many things.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I like to memorize a lot of things.

The quantifier 'many' is typically used with countable nouns, but 'things' here is vague and general; 'a lot of' is more natural and commonly used in spoken English to express a large quantity of unspecified items.

× Many types of things I remember in my daily life like changing clothes to once a day and many types of things like watering a plant and clearing my stuffs like that.

✓ I remember many types of things in my daily life, like changing clothes once a day, watering plants, and clearing my stuff.

The original sentence has poor word order and redundancy. 'Many types of things' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'changing clothes to once a day' is awkward; it should be 'changing clothes once a day'. 'Stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and does not take a plural form. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I personally like to remember important things, which is good. Remember that too in my mind and taken something alarm to the remember. I like important work to do.

✓ I personally like to remember important things, which is good. I keep them in my mind and set an alarm to remind me. I like to do important work.

The original sentences have multiple errors: 'Remember that too in my mind' is awkward and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'I keep them in my mind'. 'Taken something alarm to the remember' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'set an alarm to remind me'. 'I like important work to do' is awkward; corrected to 'I like to do important work'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.