Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子，注意语法一致性，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. As a law student, memorising is essential, especially during finals when I need to recall a lot of information quickly.

提案: 回答中出现多次重复词汇，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习正确使用时态和句子结构，避免重复词汇，表达更流畅。

例: No, I rarely forget important things because I write them down on my phone and regularly check my task list to stay organized.

提案: 回答较为简单且重复，缺乏连贯性。建议合并句子，使用连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the deadlines of my assignments because meeting them is crucial for my studies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，句子未完整结束。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually write important things down on my phone. I make a list of tasks and check it regularly, which helps me stay organized.

× Of course, as a law student, being good at memorizing is the most important survival skills, especially during the final.

✓ Of course, as a law student, being good at memorizing is the most important survival skill, especially during the final.

这里的主语是单数形式的“being good at memorizing”，所以谓语部分的名词“skills”应使用单数形式“skill”，表示“最重要的生存技能”。

× Remembering an entire book in one night is not a myth is true.

✓ Remembering an entire book in one night is not a myth; it is true.

原句中“is not a myth is true”结构混乱，缺少连接词或标点，导致句子不通顺。应使用分号或连接词“it is”使句子结构完整。

× No, I really forgot forget some forget important things because I usually write it down my phone and I often make a list of tasks and check it regularly, which helps me stay organized and avoid missing anything important.

✓ No, I really forgot some important things because I usually write them down on my phone and I often make a list of tasks and check it regularly, which helps me stay organized and avoid missing anything important.

“forgot forget some forget”重复且错误，应只用过去式“forgot”。“write it down my phone”缺少介词“on”，且“it”应改为复数“them”以对应“some important things”。

× No, I really forgot forget some forget important things because I usually write it down my phone and I often make a list of tasks and check it regularly, which helps me stay organized and avoid missing anything important.

✓ No, I really forgot some important things because I usually write them down on my phone and I often make a list of tasks and check it regularly, which helps me stay organized and avoid missing anything important.

“write it down my phone”缺少介词“on”，正确表达应为“write them down on my phone”。

× The deadline of assignment. You know as a student. As a student, you need to remember accurately the deadline of your every assignment.

✓ The deadline of an assignment. You know, as a student, you need to remember accurately the deadline of every assignment.

“deadline of assignment”缺少冠词，应为“deadline of an assignment”或“deadline of every assignment”。

× The most way I used is is to write them down on the phone.

✓ The main way I use is to write them down on the phone.

“The most way I used is is”结构错误，重复且时态不当，应改为“The main way I use is”。

× The most way I used is is to write them down on the phone.

✓ The main way I use is to write them down on the phone.

“on the phone”表达正确，保持不变。

× I often make a list of the tasks I need to do and check it regularly which helps me stay organized and.

✓ I often make a list of the tasks I need to do and check it regularly, which helps me stay organized.

句子末尾缺少完整内容，且“and”后无内容，应去掉“and”使句子完整。