Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显复杂，且缺少连接词使表达更连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词如"however"来增强逻辑性。

例: I am good at memorising things that interest me, such as facts or opinions. However, I sometimes forget random names and numbers because they don't catch my attention.

提案: 回答直接且内容具体，但句子中有语法错误（"something surprise"应为"a surprise"），且缺少连接词。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词如"but"来使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I tried to play it cool by saying I was planning a surprise, but she didn't believe me.

提案: 回答内容丰富但表达不够清晰，有语法错误（"homeworks"应为"homework"，"brand"应为"brain"），且缺少连接词。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连接词如"for example"，并简化表达。

例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, for example, my homework, my best friend's birthday, and my class times. My brain is full, so I use my note app as a second brain. If I lose my phone, it would be a big problem.

提案: 回答内容具体，但时态使用不当（"used"应为"use"），且句子结构重复。建议使用正确时态，避免重复，并用连接词如"for instance"使表达更连贯。

例: I use the note app on my phone to remember important things, for instance, my passwords and my best friend's birthdays. The app has become my second brain, so if I lose my phone, it would be a disaster.

× Well yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday and I tried to play it cool and said I was planning something surprise and she didn't buy it.

✓ Well yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday and I tried to play it cool and said I was planning something surprising and she didn't buy it.

这里的'something surprise'中'surprise'应为形容词形式'surprising'，因为它用来修饰'something'。这是形容词使用错误，正确的形容词形式应为'surprising'。

× Too many things like my homeworks, my best friend's birthday, my class times, something like that.

✓ Too many things like my homework, my best friend's birthday, my class times, something like that.

'homeworks'是不可数名词，表示作业时应使用单数形式'homework'，不能加复数形式。

× My brand is full now so my note app basically become my second brand.

✓ My brain is full now so my note app basically becomes my second brain.

这里'should be 'brain'而不是'brand'，且动词'become'应与主语'subject'保持一致，使用第三人称单数形式'becomes'。

× I just used my note app on my phone to remember all the important things like my passwords, my best friend, birthdays, something like that.

✓ I just use my note app on my phone to remember all the important things like my passwords, my best friend's birthdays, something like that.

这里时态应与上下文保持一致，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时'use'，而非过去时'used'。

× I just used my note app on my phone to remember all the important things like my passwords, my best friend, birthdays, something like that.

✓ I just use my note app on my phone to remember all the important things like my passwords, my best friend's birthdays, something like that.

'my best friend, birthdays'表达不清，应为'my best friend's birthdays'，表示复数生日，所有格形式需要加's'。

× My note app basically become my second brain so if I lost my phone someday, it is game over.

✓ My note app basically becomes my second brain so if I lose my phone someday, it is game over.

动词'become'应使用第三人称单数形式'becomes'，且条件句中时态应使用一般现在时'lose'，而非过去时'lost'。