Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在冗余且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，注意语法和单复数形式。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I major in law. There are many textbooks and materials that I need to remember. Before final exams, I usually recite important terms to improve my scores and academic performance.

提案: 回答中出现了错误词汇（'CET sex exam'），表达不准确且缺少细节。建议使用正确词汇，补充更多细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I once forgot my ID card before an important university exam. It was the CET-4 exam, and bringing the ID card was mandatory for entry, which made me very anxious.

提案: 回答表达不流畅，句子结构混乱，内容不完整。建议理清句子结构，补充具体细节，避免语法错误。

例: In my daily life, I always make a to-do list to organize my tasks and manage my time efficiently. For example, I need to memorize vocabulary and write essays before deadlines.

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连贯的表达方式。

例: I usually write important things in a small notebook that I carry with me. Whenever I go to the library or bookstore, I check my notes and review completed tasks to make sure nothing is missed.

× We should recite before the final exam terms to get a better scores and perform better on the academic.

✓ We should recite before the final exam terms to get better scores and perform better academically.

这里'scores'是复数，前面不需要加'a'，因为'a'用于单数名词。'a better scores'是错误的单复数搭配。应去掉'a'。

× I have forgotten my ID card before an important examination during my university terms.

✓ I forgot my ID card before an important examination during my university terms.

句子中描述的是过去发生的具体事件，应该用一般过去时'forgot'，而不是现在完成时'have forgotten'。

× I had to attend the CET sex exam and we had to bring our ID cards.

✓ I had to attend the CET six exam and we had to bring our ID cards.

这里'sex'应为数字'six'，属于拼写错误，不属于语法错误，但为保证准确性做了更正。

× My daily life I always make some To Do List to arrange the tasks and my time efficiently.

✓ In my daily life, I always make a To Do List to arrange tasks and manage my time efficiently.

句子结构不完整，缺少介词短语引导，且'tasks'前不需要加定冠词，'To Do List'前应加不定冠词'a'。

× You know like I have to accomplish memorizing some vocabularies, writing some essays and novels before specific.

✓ You know, I have to memorize some vocabulary, write some essays and novels before a specific time.

'vocabularies'通常不可数，改为'vocabulary'。'accomplish memorizing'搭配不当，应改为'memorize'。'before specific'不完整，应补充时间。

× I write them down in a little little books, little notebooks with me and I bring it with me whenever I head to the the library, the bookstores, and whenever I I accomplished some tasks, I double check.

✓ I write them down in little books, little notebooks with me and I bring them with me whenever I head to the library, the bookstores, and whenever I accomplish some tasks, I double check.

'a little little books'中'a'用于单数，'books'是复数，搭配错误，应去掉'a'。'bring it'指代复数，应改为'them'。'accomplished'时态错误，应为一般现在时'accomplish'。