Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, not at all. I often feel hard when I try to remember some English words. I feel my memory ability isn't as sharp as it was in high school. I wonder if it had something to do with work, because working made me feel tired.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, once I plan a trip and I was about to take the train. However, in the security check it struck me that I had forgotten my identity card. I was so nervous because the train was about to leave so I rushed to the staff window and.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Well, I think I need to remember small promises in my daily life. Even sometimes they seem not a big deal. For example, I promise to buy the dish soap for my family. It's not a big thing, but if I really forget it, it might make me more feel like I don't care what she wants.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
But I usually remember things by taking some notes. I like to jot important things down on my phone, such as some apps like WeChat or a digital notebook. They are very accessible and convenient. I can check them whenever I feel I might forget anything.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答时语言较为自然，但表达略显重复且句子结构不够紧凑。建议减少冗余，使用更连贯的句子结构，并适当使用连接词，使表达更流畅。
例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often struggle to remember English words because my memory isn't as sharp as it was in high school, probably due to feeling tired from work.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答内容不完整，句子未结束，影响表达效果。建议完整叙述事件，使用连接词使故事连贯，同时注意时态一致。
例: Yes, once I planned a trip and was about to take the train. However, during the security check, I realized I had forgotten my identity card. I felt very nervous because the train was about to leave, so I quickly went to the staff window for help.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答较为具体，但部分表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词增强逻辑性。
例: In daily life, I need to remember small promises, even if they seem minor. For instance, I promised to buy dish soap for my family. Although it's a small task, forgetting it might make them feel I don't care about their needs.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答内容完整且自然，但开头使用“but”不太合适，建议用更合适的连接词或直接开始。可以增加一些细节使回答更丰富。
例: I usually remember important things by taking notes. For example, I jot them down on my phone using apps like WeChat or a digital notebook because they are very accessible and convenient. This way, I can easily check my notes whenever I worry about forgetting something.
文法
× Yes, once I plan a trip and I was about to take the train.
✓ Yes, once I planned a trip and I was about to take the train.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词时态应使用过去式。"plan" 应改为 "planned"，表示过去计划的动作。
× I was so nervous because the train was about to leave so I rushed to the staff window and.
✓ I was so nervous because the train was about to leave, so I rushed to the staff window.
句子末尾的 "and" 后面没有内容，导致句子结构不完整。应去掉 "and"，并在两个分句之间加逗号，使句子完整通顺。
× Even sometimes they seem not a big deal.
✓ Even sometimes they seem not to be a big deal.
短语 "seem not a big deal" 缺少动词不定式 "to be"，使表达完整。应改为 "seem not to be a big deal"。
× if I really forget it, it might make me more feel like I don't care what she wants.
✓ if I really forget it, it might make me feel more like I don't care what she wants.
"make me more feel" 语序错误，正确表达应为 "make me feel more"，即动词 "make" 后接宾语和动词原形。
× I like to jot important things down on my phone, such as some apps like WeChat or a digital notebook.
✓ I like to jot important things down in my phone, such as some apps like WeChat or a digital notebook.
"jot down" 后面接地点时，通常用介词 "in" 表示在设备或应用内，而非 "on"。因此应改为 "in my phone"。
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